An April Fool
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Jellybeans Day"NaPoWriMo 2023
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That menu is familiar to me, plus a leg of lamb and some other Greek treats and sweets; and dyed red egg inside weaved baskets of bread. Easter is not the same anymore since my Mom passed. Now Dad is gone, too. It seems we five siblings were only close for them and now they are gone. Your poem sent me back with all your discipline words. It might seem dad but it was good. Your writing brought me back to my own Easters passed, :))
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That menu is familiar to me, plus a leg of lamb and some other Greek treats and sweets; and dyed red egg inside weaved baskets of bread. Easter is not the same anymore since my Mom passed. Now Dad is gone, too. It seems we five siblings were only close for them and now they are gone. Your poem sent me back with all your discipline words. It might seem dad but it was good. Your writing brought me back to my own Easters passed, :))
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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You're nice. Sorry about your parents passing. You should should get together with the siblings and have loud holiday buffets. Be happy.
Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
I think you've definitely got a tummy ache from a very yummy but decidedly risky for the stomach to handle, what a celebration, and a good reason to enjoy, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I think you've definitely got a tummy ache from a very yummy but decidedly risky for the stomach to handle, what a celebration, and a good reason to enjoy, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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You're nice. Thank you :)
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Pleasure
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness Alicia, all that sugar and rotting teeth comes to mind here! Ha ha ha, I rarely eat these sweets, but I know kids just love sweet things, I enjoyed your fun with jellybeans here, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness Alicia, all that sugar and rotting teeth comes to mind here! Ha ha ha, I rarely eat these sweets, but I know kids just love sweet things, I enjoyed your fun with jellybeans here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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They ran out of jellybeans at the grocery store. I had to write about it. Hahahahaha. You're nice. Hope you had a wonderful Easter Weekend. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hi, Sunni. Yep, that's more than enough to give you a tummy ache!
I'm a jellybean lover too, but Mostly I lave learned to control myself and I don't think I would be having them on toast!
Cute!
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hi, Sunni. Yep, that's more than enough to give you a tummy ache!
I'm a jellybean lover too, but Mostly I lave learned to control myself and I don't think I would be having them on toast!
Cute!
Steve
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
I love the playfulness of your poem! But I can't imagine eating jellybeans with toast, or chicken, or apples! Lol. But those cupcakes do look very tempting! Loved your 5-7-5 at the end, too!
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I love the playfulness of your poem! But I can't imagine eating jellybeans with toast, or chicken, or apples! Lol. But those cupcakes do look very tempting! Loved your 5-7-5 at the end, too!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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You're nice. My brother and I use to get a jellybean bag. We just walk around and nibble on them the whole Easter day(s). Thank you :)
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Sweet memory!! 🐇🎵💖
