"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual acrostic expressing your grief and loss of your son here Jason and the depth of feeling you had for him, a fine post Ricky, take care of yourself, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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An unusual acrostic expressing your grief and loss of your son here Jason and the depth of feeling you had for him, a fine post Ricky, take care of yourself, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thanks Folly.
I try to make my writings unique and different from everybody else and hopefully creating something incredible?
Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know it was heartbreaking to lose your son. I know my heart broke when I lost Michael, but I needed to keep it together for, at that time, my two other sons. I'm sure your daughter needs you, even though she's an adult now. My dad died 6 years ago, I was 63 then and still needed my dad. Just a thought.
Also, I am NOT a poet but I understood that in an acrostic poem, every line needed to spell the word, not the stanzas.
God, won't your please bring me back to my Only Jay? (you??)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I know it was heartbreaking to lose your son. I know my heart broke when I lost Michael, but I needed to keep it together for, at that time, my two other sons. I'm sure your daughter needs you, even though she's an adult now. My dad died 6 years ago, I was 63 then and still needed my dad. Just a thought.
Also, I am NOT a poet but I understood that in an acrostic poem, every line needed to spell the word, not the stanzas.
God, won't your please bring me back to my Only Jay? (you??)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thanks for reading this one and all the other additional information you provided in comments.
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