Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading.

Vut and placed on two different of "God's Vine." (Vut??)

Lost.my only wife. (switch the period for a space)

Yes it's a sin but now it's done . (comma after 'Yes' and move the period closer to 'done')

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023

Just cleaned it up a bit and added a couple more sentences.
Thanks Barbara.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Again, I feel for you. This thing that has happened is something that no one seems to get over. I admire you because you are still here and still writing. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023

Always appreciate Jess your reviews and comments.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

It hurts emotionally to read this poem Ricky. My heart goes out to you for your ongoing suffering. I am reassured that you find comfort in God's word. Well written and clearly expressed. Thank you for sharing. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023

Always appreciate your reviews and comments Jacqueline.
Doctor Ricky1024