Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Your grief and loneliness is heard in your words. I am so sorry for your loss.
I cannot help in reading your words think of my brother. He suddenly lost his wife in February.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

I'm so sorry for your loss...I understand your words, it's been more than thirty years since I lost my husband in final sleep...it's the memories that give me some peace..and the knowledge that I will see him again...Your poem is well written, good luck in the contests...
Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Sad and lonely for sure. Good rhyming and I can tell the poem is heartfelt.
Very good entry for the contest. All the best and have as a good a day as you can.
Regards
Barry Penfold

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A very sweet, direct and heart-felt message contained in this simple free verse poem of limited duration. It contains so much poignancy that can never truly be assuaged until the couple are reunited. Well done and good luck in the contest, Debbie

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023