Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a simple and remarkable poem about loneliness expressed so skilfully and poignantly in so few words. The free verse is effective in conveying his sense of feeling undone, unwound until he arrives at a totally vacuous state of nothingness. Impressive. Well done, Debbie

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for for your review and comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like utter despair as emptiness has filled you with sorrow and grief here, this is a very emotional write for the contest, a melancholy post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023

Thanks you for the review and your kind words.