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Do good and feel good poems

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Comment from Aussie
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Where would we be without Him? He gives us hope, He loves us so much. Your poem has a great strength to it, flows beautifully. The last line was a good ending to your poem; I pray, one day together, we'll live in His afterglow. Thanks for sharing and Happy Easter. K xx

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful meditation for Good Friday, and for always. I was pleased to hear these songs again, bringing back memories. Wishing you and your loved ones a meaningful and blessed Easter. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Sanku
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A very soothing and meaningful poem about Good Friday.You are right ,we have to be grateful to the blessings and we have to hope and trust he will be with us right through
Happy Easter...

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from karenina
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Good Friday is such a contemplative day, Debi. Each of us reflects on the sacrifice Jesus made to save us all. Your poem is beautifully monorhymed, and written with true grace. Sunday we will celebrate the resurrection! Thank you, as always, for reminding us all of His glorious love...and our blessings!

Karenina

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Debi, your poem is beautifully penned in soft and soulful imagery.

Of special note:
Our Savior paid it all for me, and all to Him I owe
(Indeed, we all do...for every breath we take)

Also:
Then Pilate gave the choice away; it was politico
(Some things never change, not even almost 2000 years later.)

And:
I pray, one day together, we'll live in His AfterGlow
(I hope for the same thing. Then we can drink coffee together each and every day.)

Good rhyming. Perfect photo choice. Thanks for sharing the great YouTube. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
Xo. M

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

Comment from Teri7
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Debi, I hope you had a wonderful Good Friday today. This is a very beautiful and well written poem that is so true. Thank you for the lovely videos. Because He Lives makes me cry. He is so good to us! and the other song is so true too! Thank you for the joy to brought to my heart tonight! I love you sweet friend, but God loves you so much more!!! Happy Easter!!!, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Jesus is the best friend we have; we should always seek Him. The Lord has given us many blessings that we should count daily. I will always be thankful for what He does. Love the musical videos.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What a meaningful poem for the Easter season, Debi.
I loved reading it. It's evident these words were straight
from your heart. The videos were awesome, too. I loved
the monorhyme. The lines flowed smoothly, the rhymes
weren't forced. Your message was clear to all. We all have
many blessings they can't be counted, but we see them everyday.
Your color schema was perfect. I loved the beautiful picture
with God's rainbow. I liked how you included yourself then added
the others too.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

Comment from jmdg1954
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Debi,
I've done wrong things in my life which I have yet to share here on FanStory, which I will one day. But I know our Lord has forgiven me and has given me the strength and courage to carry on and live life in the manner he expects and how I should.
Thank you for your great poem for Good Friday, Debi and thank you for being you.
I pray you and your family have a wonderful Easter.
John

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Debi. This was wonderfully done, the picture was truly superb, showing the cross in the clouds with the rainbow. The two videos were fantastic and your words were spot on. Blessings n Hugs!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023