Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Memories do last forever. I know that from experience. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I couldn't find any way to improve it. It's a very good write. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023

Memories are sometimes grieving thoughts goatee with Endless Tears.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These memories will always stay with you Ricky as you love your son Jason and you will never forget him as he is in your heart forever, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks and Jason does too!
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a beautiful and poignant dedication to Jay. So skilfully and uniquely expressed with heart-breaking number-count, imagery and picture. I particularly liked the "knot of forgot" and the play on words with the (Shakespearean) "To Be or then to be Knot." I would only point out that perhaps "guilt" was intended rather than "quilt" but hardly a distraction from such an impressive work.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks for pointing out the "Quilt" error Debbie.
To Quilt is to Knit.
To never quit.
Lost the Son than shortly the Wife.
To never forget it?
Both necessary and slowly...
Killing
Me...
Doctor Ricky1024