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An April Fool

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NaPoWriMo 2023

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Comment from lyenochka
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Loved your poetic history of ketchup. I think even the name is some poor pronunciation of a Cantonese Chinese word. It is definitely an important condiment for us Americans!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Thank you
    Happy Easter :)
reply by lyenochka on 09-Apr-2023
    Happy Easter to you, too!! 💖💞🌼🎵💐
Comment from pome lover
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well, that made me smile. your choice for Good Friday. Have to say, it was informative and clever. Cute, cute.
If you don't mind my asking, after reading your bio (before the "more,") what, out of all your degrees and studies, is your present vocation? They all sounded very interesting.
Katharine

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    I'm an executive woman, actress and writer/poet.
    Thank you
    Happy Easter :)
reply by pome lover on 09-Apr-2023
    Sounds fascinating! varied interests.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Firstly, your image is so great, and brings your words to life. Not only did you rhyme and flow your words nicely, but you sldo presented very. Interesting information. The Reader will want to find out more, and I think that's a good thing for writing to do, encourage thinking. You have a good poem here! I enjoyed it! :))

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Thank you
    Happy Easter :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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My Grandson loves ketchup but I hate the stuff. I know some people just can't eat their meal without it. I enjoyed your fine rhyming poem about ketchup Alicia, you made me smile, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    You're a kind grandma. Thank you. Love always, Alicia Seecharan :)
Comment from royowen
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I must admit, I can't tell the difference between tomato sauce and tomato ketchup, but both taste very similar to me, this is a great poem in couplets dear Alicia, well done, happy Easter, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    Ketchup is made with vinegar. It's pungent to me. You might taste the difference of spaghetti. You're nice. Thank you :)
reply by royowen on 11-Apr-2023
    Bless you
Comment from Ricky1024
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What would life be without our ketchup on our burgers, fries and hot dogs??
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
    You're nice. Thank you.
    Have a wonderful week :)