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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Congratulations.
So artfully crafted and beautifully presented.
This style is certainly a medium to showcase your talent.
I applaud you.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Congratulations.
So artfully crafted and beautifully presented.
This style is certainly a medium to showcase your talent.
I applaud you.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
"Raging Autumn Gale"
Nice Art was also well written Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Ccontents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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"Raging Autumn Gale"
Nice Art was also well written Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
...
My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Ccontents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful Gogyohka, Gypsy. The picture was so delightful that it captured the essence of your words. I loved your words because they were so simple and very true. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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This was a wonderful Gogyohka, Gypsy. The picture was so delightful that it captured the essence of your words. I loved your words because they were so simple and very true. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Aryr, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, one equating love/lust with stomy weather. My love live equates yo the blizzard of 1876, a deep freeze of nothing. And te forecast is more of the same!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, one equating love/lust with stomy weather. My love live equates yo the blizzard of 1876, a deep freeze of nothing. And te forecast is more of the same!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Mike, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
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Could my spelling GET any worse? When I use my tablet to type, this mess is the result; and I'm too impatient to proofread before I push send
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This one-sided love deserves the harsh words, raging, blasts, and blazing. These words set the mood perfectly as they turn to ashes. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing. As usual the presentation is perfect.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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This one-sided love deserves the harsh words, raging, blasts, and blazing. These words set the mood perfectly as they turn to ashes. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing. As usual the presentation is perfect.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i love the words raging, blasts, blazing, and longing in this gogyohka - and then your ending line went perfectly with them
great work! thank you for sharing it
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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i love the words raging, blasts, blazing, and longing in this gogyohka - and then your ending line went perfectly with them
great work! thank you for sharing it
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Shelley, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Gogyohka poem- poem flows well - tells a story of emotional conflict- raging Gale - dark dank moor on one side - while at the same time remembering a beautiful peaceful sunset setting -your heart aflame- even in the ashes of a tragic one sided experience- I like the dimensionality- realistic- where life sometimes takes us - good job AP
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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I like your Gogyohka poem- poem flows well - tells a story of emotional conflict- raging Gale - dark dank moor on one side - while at the same time remembering a beautiful peaceful sunset setting -your heart aflame- even in the ashes of a tragic one sided experience- I like the dimensionality- realistic- where life sometimes takes us - good job AP
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, AP, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, that is painful to have a "one-sided love." But since it is already in ashes, perhaps the "blazing sunset" will burn it down and bring relief in the morning with a fresh view after being released from it.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Ah, that is painful to have a "one-sided love." But since it is already in ashes, perhaps the "blazing sunset" will burn it down and bring relief in the morning with a fresh view after being released from it.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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yes, you are right. From the ashes the phoenix is reborn.
Thank you, big sister, I appreciate your kind review.
love,
marival