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An April Fool

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NaPoWriMo 2023

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Comment from royowen
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You certainly know how to pick great artwork Alicia, it sets the mouth watering and anticipating what is in store for the mouth to slaver over, this is beautifully written my dear friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    You're nice. Thank you :)
reply by royowen on 07-Apr-2023
    A pleasure
Comment from lyenochka
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I see - you were having fun with the idiom to "butter up" as in flattery. But you made it more of a suggestion of better treats to have at night like herbal tea with pound cake. Carbs help to sleep better, too!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    There are plenty ways to butter up a person(s). I didn't have a direct audience to specify. Thank you :)
Comment from shelley kaye
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i don't really care much for butter lol
but i did like this buttery poem
especially the pound cake
and now i want some cake LOL

nice work!
thank you for sharing

shelley ð?¦?


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Regina Elliott
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Hi! You've penned such a
delightful and breezy poem
here. I drink decaf green tea
in the afternoons. I love the
flavor and unless I'm real
thirsty, don't like plain water.
The treats you mention sound
delicious. Have a grand upcoming weekend. :)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Decaf green tea is new to me. I drink any tea mostly iced. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This made me smile because I never buy butter and I do miss it, but I never allow myself to eat it. Your poem made me want to buy some now! Very naughty and your buttering up worked on me Alicia, a fun poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Hellow Dolly. I gave up butter for the plantbased stuff becasue of arthritis. You're nice. Thank you. Love always, S Alicia Seecharan