Comment from eliz100

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. I really like the first line. And the continued use of webs to delineate obligations. I used to be able but I did a lot of work on myself. Becoming a psychiatric nurse helped. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This free verse, Obligations, sees the comparison of the spider's webbing as the kind of relationships one may be obliged to commit to for the long haul. ..............................................

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

An interesting analogy used in comparing obligations to sticky spider webs you can't pull off.
Vivid description of the obstacles such webs present one with. Indeed both "are not easily shed." Rod

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review!

Comment from Julie Lau

Exceptional

I find this so relevant, and what a unique way of looking at the problem, and so graphically described. You well deserve the six. My sincere congratulations to you for this wonderful piece.
Julie Lau

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for all the stars! I really appreciate your comments.
Mintybee