Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good words that are so true. Very nice art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks, I had not heard from you for a few days, hope you are well.

Comment from Lady MJ

Excellent

Nicely written. The picture says it all! The words of this poem makes me think and analyze myself to see if I am being balanced and focusing on what's most important. Great poem!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is good advice for anyone as we are all different and what is important to one may not be for another. Just one thing, your second verse only has 6 words. Cheers

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Fixed

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Yes and no truer words have been spoken. I think we all need to reflect a little bit every now and again just to ground ourselves in central ourselves. And realize what is the main core of what we need never mind the icing on the cake. This is a very good write and I appreciate your sentiment and the subject matter is awesome.
I also enjoyed the picture going with your poem seems to match very well. I find it aesthetically pleasing and as well. I don't find any errors as far as grammar spelling or sentence structure. This is a fine submission for this contest good luck I hope you have a good evening!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks!