Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

This is a nice septulet poem. Only problem is you need to put guns by itself on the first stanza so you'll have seven lines total. Keep up the great poetry writing.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

thanks I fixed it all ready

reply by pookietoo on 05-Apr-2023

great

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There seems to be a big problem with guns just lately and tighter gun laws would help the situation, but when there is a weak Presidency then nothing will change unfortunately, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

thanks a lot

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

You have done an excellent job with the writing. The subject you wrote about is a touchy one in the world today. I see this is a contest entry, so I wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

thanks a lot