Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

This is beautiful, Gypsy. I love the style and you brought the reader into your thoughts. Nicely done.

I'm going to give it a go.

Thanks for bringing us new styles of poetry.

-Kerry

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Kerry. I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Kerry Foley on 17-Apr-2023

Hugs!

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

You can almost hear the laughter in reading your words. A wonderful read and so colorfully presented. It is delicious!
I enjoyed reading.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

I liked the creative way you presented your mischievous muse. I'm liking the gogyohka form, as well. My muse hides too often, but then when he comes out of hiding, I am delighted to see him!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

I wrote a poem for the president of a major church up in East Brunswick about 8 years ago.
His name was President Stokes.
So I wrote him a poem called "Stoke the Fire"
After he listened to a couple testimonies as he was reading it and church broke up. He said this to me.
' You're my muse!!'
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Thanks for the Amusing Memory!
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gyps

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I like the tickle...tickle and then then entangled laughter. This was a fun poem to read. Of course the presentation is perfect, as usual. Thank you for bringing joy to us today.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.

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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Exceptional

A delightful read and so beautifully presented.
It's refreshing to feel the joy in your chosen words bubble into laughter.
Laughter brings much joy to modern troubled lives.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Shirley, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful day.

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Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Gypsy. Yes the muse whispers a lot and at times I can hear her laughter, and wonder dare i write that Just wondering and only my interpretation

I whisper
the poems I wrote for you
in your ear
......

Should it be that
I whisper
the poem I wrote for you
into your ear
instead as it reads like the poems were written in her ear and not whispered into

But i liked the overall presentation

Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Chris, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day. I corrected that word, thank you!

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Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

Okay, you whacked this one......its going.....going......gone! Home run!!!

Well done. This piece elicits emotion. Very enjoyable read, my friend.
Douglas

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you, Douglas, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I'm happy you like it.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I love the "entangled in laughter"! It shows how the ticklish words brings joy and affirms the love between the couple. And the repetition of "tickle" makes the feeling even more noticed.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you, big sister, as always, I appreciate your insightful review. Love you.

Marival ❤️

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Gogyhoka poem- excellent picture presentation- a muse with a sense of humor yet- poem is very clever! Will from time to need exercise the non- publish clause for representations sake? Lol
Nice job AP

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, ap, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.

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