Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 131 "When You Come"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Mark Schardine
Being one of many admirers can mean waiting to see if you enjoy his favors, or perhaps he asks himself if he fancies you. We do wonder about his point of view, and how much he thinks of you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Being one of many admirers can mean waiting to see if you enjoy his favors, or perhaps he asks himself if he fancies you. We do wonder about his point of view, and how much he thinks of you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your excellent review.
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is an enjoyable poem to read, but sad. I wish this young lady thought more highly of herself. She is worthy. I know she is. Of course, it's fiction, but she's still worthy. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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This is an enjoyable poem to read, but sad. I wish this young lady thought more highly of herself. She is worthy. I know she is. Of course, it's fiction, but she's still worthy. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy---a poem with a double meaning, depending on how perverted and twisted your imagination is, and believe me, mine's severely perverted!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy---a poem with a double meaning, depending on how perverted and twisted your imagination is, and believe me, mine's severely perverted!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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LoL Thank you very much, Mike, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful read, sometimes love can lead us in the wrong direction, we have the power to choose the sort of love we need and desire, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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What a beautiful read, sometimes love can lead us in the wrong direction, we have the power to choose the sort of love we need and desire, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, kym, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aww such a sad poem...
but very well written
question: did you mean to put dreams/needs so close together - i think they're near rhymes... or maybe it's just me lol
thought i'd mention it...
nice gogyohka!
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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aww such a sad poem...
but very well written
question: did you mean to put dreams/needs so close together - i think they're near rhymes... or maybe it's just me lol
thought i'd mention it...
nice gogyohka!
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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I go for words with a pleasant sound but any rhymes are unintentional. Thank you, Shelley, I appreciate your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from JT traveller
A very clever write. The meter and symmetry is executed so well the poem seems as if it should rhyme, but it does not. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and was left wondering what was going to happen next. I wanted more. Always a good thing. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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A very clever write. The meter and symmetry is executed so well the poem seems as if it should rhyme, but it does not. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and was left wondering what was going to happen next. I wanted more. Always a good thing. Jacqueline
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Jacqueline, thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and the kind words. I am happy you like it and want more :) Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you and good morning Gypsy. Jacqueline 😊