Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet! You have your first vote.

I enjoyed reading your poem!

Birds are free to come and go, to fly high then soar and looking at them we do envy them .

But being free is not always a bed of roses . There is a high price to pay.

Birds face many challenges : the weather: erratic, cold, hot etc

food: it s not easy to find and it really gets tough when there is a brood to feed...

predators : especially
smaller birds, like the one in your pic, are easy prey for many hungry hunting mouths.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for your review. So glad you enjoyed it!

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

I like this witty poem. Sometimes it certainly feels like we are walking on a wire fifty feet up with no net beneath us, but there's often quite a view from up there. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for your review and wish!

reply by Mary Shifman on 08-Apr-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from pookietoo

Good

This is a decent try at a septolet poem. The poem is supposed to be two stanzas with seven lines total. Yes, life is a challenge. Keep smiling and be creative.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thanks for taking the time to review! My first try at doing this. Enjoy your day.

reply by pookietoo on 05-Apr-2023

You are welcome, but you did not change your poem.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Birds look down upon us and they are laughing as they rule the world from the skies, your unique write made me smile and I enjoyed the sentiment, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you! I love the way the ducks land on the wires.