The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
A good chapter Sally with the blind detective and King joining in the hunt. Just a couple of Typos - profound sadness that's (that) lingers here
but as soon (as) I had the chance
This story is going weĺl,
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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A good chapter Sally with the blind detective and King joining in the hunt. Just a couple of Typos - profound sadness that's (that) lingers here
but as soon (as) I had the chance
This story is going weĺl,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dear Valda, thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it. Sending love my very best to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from Sankey
Another great read and glad you all turned up even if a bit late. Well done and looking forward to where we are going, nearing the end I surmise? No spags.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Another great read and glad you all turned up even if a bit late. Well done and looking forward to where we are going, nearing the end I surmise? No spags.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dear Geoff,
Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous six star rating. It is so appreciated. No spags? Unbelievable!
Blessings to you both, Sally.XOs
Comment from WalkerMan
Eventually, a perpetual sinner reaches a point of lack of satisfaction with accumulated wealth and power, plus fear of coming retribution. It seems that Fee is in that moment, and Patience is both keeping him from doing more harm and giving him time to repent before his fate is sealed. Firing his pistol shows his level of desperation.
As usual, you use plausible dialog to convey what is occurring, so all those assembled will be properly informed before action is taken to find and arrest Fee.
When the whole crew arrives at Fee's estate, it is interesting that Willa and Tommy sense a "profound sadness" lingering there.
I especially like the paragraph where Tommy wonders what the confident, fast-walking blind detective eats for breakfast.
The next-to-last paragraph makes it clear that the team is now on Fee's trail, so we readers have much to anticipate in the coming chapters.
Superb, and splendidly illustrated with the tree-like angel image.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Eventually, a perpetual sinner reaches a point of lack of satisfaction with accumulated wealth and power, plus fear of coming retribution. It seems that Fee is in that moment, and Patience is both keeping him from doing more harm and giving him time to repent before his fate is sealed. Firing his pistol shows his level of desperation.
As usual, you use plausible dialog to convey what is occurring, so all those assembled will be properly informed before action is taken to find and arrest Fee.
When the whole crew arrives at Fee's estate, it is interesting that Willa and Tommy sense a "profound sadness" lingering there.
I especially like the paragraph where Tommy wonders what the confident, fast-walking blind detective eats for breakfast.
The next-to-last paragraph makes it clear that the team is now on Fee's trail, so we readers have much to anticipate in the coming chapters.
Superb, and splendidly illustrated with the tree-like angel image.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter, Mike. It means so much. I am glad you are always looking forward to the next chapter. I hope to please. Sending you my best, and blessings always.
Sal :)))):
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You are most welcome, Sal. Each new chapter seems eve better than the one before it. Only the best authors achieve such a streak of readers' excitement. Brava! :))))) -- Mike
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Awwwww! :)))))
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Comment from Jay Squires
Well, Sally is a take-control kind of detective, isn't she? I like that about her. Fee'd better watch out trying to boss Patience around. Another good chapter, Sally.
Jay
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Well, Sally is a take-control kind of detective, isn't she? I like that about her. Fee'd better watch out trying to boss Patience around. Another good chapter, Sally.
Jay
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dear James, thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments. I?m so glad you like me as the blind detective visiting this book. Sending love my very best to you all, Sal XOs
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What's not to love?
Comment from poetwatch
It's time to party! Sally, the King is on the trial with muscle Samson close behind. Fee has nowhere to run and no place to hide. Yet, he took a shot at something unknown trying to bury a bone. What kind of angelic creature is that? I guess i'll have to wait to satisfy my curiosity. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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It's time to party! Sally, the King is on the trial with muscle Samson close behind. Fee has nowhere to run and no place to hide. Yet, he took a shot at something unknown trying to bury a bone. What kind of angelic creature is that? I guess i'll have to wait to satisfy my curiosity. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both are greatly appreciated. Stay tuned! Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Sally:
As usual, I loved this. And, of course, I am going to have to make the time to go back and peruse this from the very beginning. I'm not as resilient as I used to be, my friend, so it is hard for me to review others and post my work. I am trying! jan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Sally:
As usual, I loved this. And, of course, I am going to have to make the time to go back and peruse this from the very beginning. I'm not as resilient as I used to be, my friend, so it is hard for me to review others and post my work. I am trying! jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter and for catching up with me, dear, Jan! It means so much.
Sending along my very best to you all,
Sally XOs
Comment from BethShelby
This picture you used must have inspired you description of the spirit that held Fee. I sure a bullet would do a spirit no harm. I'm glad you (the blind lady) and the dogs are into the search. You story hold the reader interest and we're always ready to read more.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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This picture you used must have inspired you description of the spirit that held Fee. I sure a bullet would do a spirit no harm. I'm glad you (the blind lady) and the dogs are into the search. You story hold the reader interest and we're always ready to read more.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. Yes, picture help me along with my description. I?ve had it in my photo album for a long time. Sending love my very best to you all, Sally.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
To be a detective and to have a dog like King would be an understatement. I wonder if there is a dog named King and is as intelligent as the fictional dog in the story. Unto next chapter.... will they soon capture the bad fellow. (Fee)?
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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To be a detective and to have a dog like King would be an understatement. I wonder if there is a dog named King and is as intelligent as the fictional dog in the story. Unto next chapter.... will they soon capture the bad fellow. (Fee)?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review of my book chapter, Rosemary. It is most appreciated. Blessings,
Sally XOs
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent chapter. The tension rises as the hunt continues. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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This is an excellent chapter. The tension rises as the hunt continues. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Elizabeth! Your kind review is most appreciated.
Blessings,
Sal :))
Comment from royowen
Typo : Isn't that the way of the narcissist, they think they are demigods appointed to rule the world? One would have to be a fool to not believe that in many ways dogs have more integrity than any man, more heroic too! the forces swear by them, beautifully written Sally blessings Roy
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Typo : Isn't that the way of the narcissist, they think they are demigods appointed to rule the world? One would have to be a fool to not believe that in many ways dogs have more integrity than any man, more heroic too! the forces swear by them, beautifully written Sally blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Roy. Your kind review of my book chapter is most appreciated. Sending you my all my very best,
Sal XOs
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
