The Aspen Grove Murders
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much! Sal xoxo
Comment from Liz O'Neill
A little ego centric, but do you mention the coffee just for me???lol You will have the reader leaning forward: "Nothing he said altered the creature's position, as it forbade him to move past the porch. " A nice bit of curious humor: "My wife and partner had to reach over and close my gaping mouth." The reader wonders what disruption will arise: "that we'll have Fitzgerald Elling behind bars sooner than later." You have the gift of deawing the reader in: "Willa touched my hand gently, and said, "I feel something, Tommy. I can't put my finger on it though." This is excellent: ", "King tells me it's the man we're looking for, and Samson has just confirmed it" This was very good A+ material
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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A little ego centric, but do you mention the coffee just for me???lol You will have the reader leaning forward: "Nothing he said altered the creature's position, as it forbade him to move past the porch. " A nice bit of curious humor: "My wife and partner had to reach over and close my gaping mouth." The reader wonders what disruption will arise: "that we'll have Fitzgerald Elling behind bars sooner than later." You have the gift of deawing the reader in: "Willa touched my hand gently, and said, "I feel something, Tommy. I can't put my finger on it though." This is excellent: ", "King tells me it's the man we're looking for, and Samson has just confirmed it" This was very good A+ material
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Dear Liz, thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. The stars are pretty pleasing and of course my A+ has me delirious! Thank you, I am honored. I?m glad you?re enjoying my book. Blessings to you all.
Sal XOs
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You make me smile, Sally
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
Well, the blind detective, Miles and the two dogs are on the case. Fee doesn't stand a chance. And if he thinks he can kill an angel with a bullet, he's sadly mistaken.
What an awesome sight that must have been for Fee as he stepped outside the cabin..."Shrouded in white mist was an otherworldly creature, hovering like a giant hummingbird over the ground. The form resembled an angel, with branch-like wings on each side of its transparent body, the wingspan extending far beyond his peripheral sight."
Imagine the thoughts of all involved in this investigation, especially those who aren't Christians as they hear this... "Here's the thing that makes me hopeful. The house staff reported an angel put out the fire and escorted them to safety. Each one described her as having long, golden hair, enormous wings, and a crown on her head."
The repercussions here are tremendous. The knowledge of an actual angel being present and involved in the investigation would be mind-blowing. I mean, it's knowledge of God and Heaven, unmistaken evidence. Proof, if you will. There wouldn't be a "doubting Thomas" among them. Their lives would be changed forever.
So, Tommy and Willa, Sally and Miles, and King & Samson are getting prepared to meet up with Fee in the next few minutes. And Patience is already at the scene. The next chapter should be wild.
"Filling the atrium was (most) every law enforcement officer in Aspen County, along with our visiting friends from Lafayette Township PD." ... (did you mean to use "almost" here?)
Nicely penned, Sally!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Hi Sally,
Well, the blind detective, Miles and the two dogs are on the case. Fee doesn't stand a chance. And if he thinks he can kill an angel with a bullet, he's sadly mistaken.
What an awesome sight that must have been for Fee as he stepped outside the cabin..."Shrouded in white mist was an otherworldly creature, hovering like a giant hummingbird over the ground. The form resembled an angel, with branch-like wings on each side of its transparent body, the wingspan extending far beyond his peripheral sight."
Imagine the thoughts of all involved in this investigation, especially those who aren't Christians as they hear this... "Here's the thing that makes me hopeful. The house staff reported an angel put out the fire and escorted them to safety. Each one described her as having long, golden hair, enormous wings, and a crown on her head."
The repercussions here are tremendous. The knowledge of an actual angel being present and involved in the investigation would be mind-blowing. I mean, it's knowledge of God and Heaven, unmistaken evidence. Proof, if you will. There wouldn't be a "doubting Thomas" among them. Their lives would be changed forever.
So, Tommy and Willa, Sally and Miles, and King & Samson are getting prepared to meet up with Fee in the next few minutes. And Patience is already at the scene. The next chapter should be wild.
"Filling the atrium was (most) every law enforcement officer in Aspen County, along with our visiting friends from Lafayette Township PD." ... (did you mean to use "almost" here?)
Nicely penned, Sally!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the super review and generous star blast, Kim. I am so very blessed. I?m glad you enjoyed it all. Yes, I meant to say (almost) as Aspen County is depicted as being much larger than Aspen Grove and encompasses the entire area and Meyer?s Hollow.
So glad you like. Thank you, again! Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from Cindy Warren
I think Fee is lucky Patience is allowing him to wait for the police. I can't imagine the shot he fired will have much effect. King will have his ass in his teeth within the hour, I think.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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I think Fee is lucky Patience is allowing him to wait for the police. I can't imagine the shot he fired will have much effect. King will have his ass in his teeth within the hour, I think.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the insightful review and comments. Both are so appreciated.
Blessings! Sal xoxo
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very interesting story and quite intriguing. You have written it very well and it flows smoothly when it is rather loud. I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best and all that you write Patricia
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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This is a very interesting story and quite intriguing. You have written it very well and it flows smoothly when it is rather loud. I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best and all that you write Patricia
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dear Patricia. Thank you so much for staying tuned to my book and for the wonderful review. It?s so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Sally, yet again you have surpassed yourself. You build every single scene to perfection, and now in the last one you leave us in suspense. I can't wait reading on. A hug, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Wow, Sally, yet again you have surpassed yourself. You build every single scene to perfection, and now in the last one you leave us in suspense. I can't wait reading on. A hug, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dear Ulla, thank you again for the wonderful review and super stars! I am so very blessed to have you close. Blessings to you always,
Sal XOs
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Bless you!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Fee is not enjoying being a fugitive, but I am sure he thinks he will get away. Sally Law and the dogs are certain they can catch him. Does he have enough evil comrades to defeat them? The suspense builds. You might want to make one correction: . . . APB has (been) sent . . .
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Fee is not enjoying being a fugitive, but I am sure he thinks he will get away. Sally Law and the dogs are certain they can catch him. Does he have enough evil comrades to defeat them? The suspense builds. You might want to make one correction: . . . APB has (been) sent . . .
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and helpful critique. Both of us are so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Well, Sally and the dogs may be on the case, but Fee isn't going anywhere with Patience holding him in place until the calvary arrives!
Sally is an interesting character (just like you!) - a smart, confident woman. Great character for your story.
See you next week:-)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Well, Sally and the dogs may be on the case, but Fee isn't going anywhere with Patience holding him in place until the calvary arrives!
Sally is an interesting character (just like you!) - a smart, confident woman. Great character for your story.
See you next week:-)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Dear Pam, thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter. It?s always a pleasure to see you, and I feel so blessed. Sending along my best to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from Wendy G
Looks like Fee will pay the full price for his sins and evil, if not even an angel can bring him to acknowledge his evil ways and turn from them. Now that Sally and King are there it should be resolved quickly for right and justice to prevail. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Looks like Fee will pay the full price for his sins and evil, if not even an angel can bring him to acknowledge his evil ways and turn from them. Now that Sally and King are there it should be resolved quickly for right and justice to prevail. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. It is so appreciated and needed. Blessings to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Ooooh I just cannot get enough of this thrilling chiller. I am so happy that Sally has joined the team, as she is such a wonderful and experienced detective. Much like her real self, so intuitive and knows the drift of things when others are blind to the situation. Yet Tommy, Willa and others are so good too and I adore the loving couple who fight crime and work for love, family and goodness by day together. And at night together are still the loving couple, who make love and goodness, from the privacy of their own bedroom, and hopefully on their way to starting a new family. And to Fee I say, you can run, but you can't hide. Your evil deeds are about to come to an end and I just pray they find you before you find Candace and Simon. Oh no, is this good news or bad that I am talking to the characters are real. Lol....This chapter is no different as far as the chill factor goes.. it gets more excited with each one, but I am so hard to please, as I just get enough. You always leave me wanting more. Thank you my friend for another lovely chapter, and like always, so looking forward to the next one.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Ooooh I just cannot get enough of this thrilling chiller. I am so happy that Sally has joined the team, as she is such a wonderful and experienced detective. Much like her real self, so intuitive and knows the drift of things when others are blind to the situation. Yet Tommy, Willa and others are so good too and I adore the loving couple who fight crime and work for love, family and goodness by day together. And at night together are still the loving couple, who make love and goodness, from the privacy of their own bedroom, and hopefully on their way to starting a new family. And to Fee I say, you can run, but you can't hide. Your evil deeds are about to come to an end and I just pray they find you before you find Candace and Simon. Oh no, is this good news or bad that I am talking to the characters are real. Lol....This chapter is no different as far as the chill factor goes.. it gets more excited with each one, but I am so hard to please, as I just get enough. You always leave me wanting more. Thank you my friend for another lovely chapter, and like always, so looking forward to the next one.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Debi!! I can't believe you had the day you had and got around to reading my book chapter! What a wonderful review and super stars to match! I am both honored and blessed, my friend. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter to as we have so much going on. The plot thickens and all eyes are on the cabin. Stay tuned!
Sending you my best, and love and blessings always,
BBB XOs
