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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Ooo Honey"NaPoWriMo 2023
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Comment from lyenochka
Wow! That's a great factoid! I love all the health benefits of honey and that it has no expiration date is a marvelous date! Great example to use King Tut's tomb findings!!
Suggestions:
scientist raids king tut's tomb (Tut's)
honey wont expire (won't)
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Wow! That's a great factoid! I love all the health benefits of honey and that it has no expiration date is a marvelous date! Great example to use King Tut's tomb findings!!
Suggestions:
scientist raids king tut's tomb (Tut's)
honey wont expire (won't)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from Kayliegh
Ooo very well written poem! This is very interesting, also very true! I have always wondered what five thousand year old honey would taste like... great job! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
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Ooo very well written poem! This is very interesting, also very true! I have always wondered what five thousand year old honey would taste like... great job! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
hmm so honey never expires? wow.
a very interesting tanka and haiku combo
cool bee pic too!
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
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hmm so honey never expires? wow.
a very interesting tanka and haiku combo
cool bee pic too!
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Imagine the thrill of such a discovery. Still sweet after five millennia. Good advice on its storage. Having lived in Egypt, I especially like your poem.
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Imagine the thrill of such a discovery. Still sweet after five millennia. Good advice on its storage. Having lived in Egypt, I especially like your poem.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, how fascinating is this Alicia, I wonder did anyone eat it? I suppose that sugary things keep for years, but 5,132 years is a very long time! A fabulous poem full of sweet tasting nectar, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness, how fascinating is this Alicia, I wonder did anyone eat it? I suppose that sugary things keep for years, but 5,132 years is a very long time! A fabulous poem full of sweet tasting nectar, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from royowen
It's an amazing fact that honey is mentioned several times in scripture and is possibly the most nutritious food of all, in fact Royal jelly has been said to cure many health afflictions, well done Alicia, blessing Roy
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It's an amazing fact that honey is mentioned several times in scripture and is possibly the most nutritious food of all, in fact Royal jelly has been said to cure many health afflictions, well done Alicia, blessing Roy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023