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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Extraordinary Eyes"NaPoWriMo 2023
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Comment from Kayliegh
Ooo I love this! Great job with wording, I definitely wouldn't be able to do that! Amazing job!! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
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Ooo I love this! Great job with wording, I definitely wouldn't be able to do that! Amazing job!! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
i got brown eyes... my husband had blue eyes... my daughter was born with green eyes and changed to hazel as she grew LOL!
cool and interesting facts!
one suggestion i can make is to maybe divide it up into shorter stanzas instead of one long one... just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
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i got brown eyes... my husband had blue eyes... my daughter was born with green eyes and changed to hazel as she grew LOL!
cool and interesting facts!
one suggestion i can make is to maybe divide it up into shorter stanzas instead of one long one... just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are fascinating facts about eyes and I have no idea about any of these. I have green eyes, my Father had blue eyes and my Mother had brown eyes, so blue and brown must make green! Ha ha ha, an imaginative and informative post Alicia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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These are fascinating facts about eyes and I have no idea about any of these. I have green eyes, my Father had blue eyes and my Mother had brown eyes, so blue and brown must make green! Ha ha ha, an imaginative and informative post Alicia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your fun facts about eyes! I actually know a person with one blue eye and one brown eye. Yes, that blue eye gene only occurred about 7,000 years ago.
Yes, let's avoid that giant squid!
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Enjoyed your fun facts about eyes! I actually know a person with one blue eye and one brown eye. Yes, that blue eye gene only occurred about 7,000 years ago.
Yes, let's avoid that giant squid!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
Comment from royowen
Thank you for this fantastic poem and these facts, I'm glad I've got eyes that I can view the beauty of the earth and all its colour and wondrous variety, it is a privilege, well done, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this fantastic poem and these facts, I'm glad I've got eyes that I can view the beauty of the earth and all its colour and wondrous variety, it is a privilege, well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you. God bless... :)
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A pleasure