Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Our bodies are really on loan from God, so it's important to share what we can with others. I'm glad you share that knowledge with us.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you Barbie.
And, I feel exactly the same way.
I even wrote a piece once called, "Your Rental"
Ricky

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

marking that "donor" circle on your licence is important i think...

interesting story poem!

thank you for sharing

shelley ð?¦?

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thanks for stopping by Shelley.
We really appreciate that.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Wow! Talk about an impactful write! This is amazing work.. You're writing packs a punch. What a thing anyone to go thru!
Having said all that but I find your work to be aesthetically pleasing. I find new issues with grammar sentence structure, spelling or anything like that. It all looks very good.
I hope all involved are doing well today! I thank you for this wonderful piece of work And am riveted by your writing. I hope you have a great night!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

This is what I do and I've been doing it 20 years.
I am honed my craft and made my own style unique.
Thanks Lea.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I remember hearing and knowing that our bodies are really on loan, and surely if that is the case, if the breath is gone from our bodies, then surely it can live on, and give life to another, good idea, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Yes thanks Roy.
To write about life after death is something highly unique unusual and a blessing for me!
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 04-Apr-2023

Well done

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

This is a very good read. Full of internal meaning and hidden pathways.

This part was poignant, if not exquisitely worded:

Unify but divide.
Divide with Unification.
Unification from me to you!

Nice work, Doc!!!
D

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

20 years ago on March 31st 2003 I was thrown into the life of Organ tissue donation.
You would never think after raising five children that one had to be given away in order for four others to live.
Thanks and always a pleasure Douglas.
Doctor Ricky