Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 126 "In Love With Being In Love"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Mark Schardine
Tantalizing means something or somebody out of reach, and perhaps never to be in reach. Only memories remain, and certainly very fond memories for you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Tantalizing means something or somebody out of reach, and perhaps never to be in reach. Only memories remain, and certainly very fond memories for you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your excellent review.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem presentation is wonderful. It is full of emotion, romance, and feelings of happiness. There are certain words that add sexuality to this poem. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Your poem presentation is wonderful. It is full of emotion, romance, and feelings of happiness. There are certain words that add sexuality to this poem. Best of luck.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Rosemary, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Oh my gosh Gypsy, this is amazing.
I loved it -- the entire presentation is gorgeous.
Thanks for sharing
-Kerry.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Oh my gosh Gypsy, this is amazing.
I loved it -- the entire presentation is gorgeous.
Thanks for sharing
-Kerry.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Kerry. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
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You're welcome.
Comment from patcelaw
You have very well described a loving relationship between a husband and a wife. I enjoy this very much. I lost my husband almost 28 years ago and I still have fond memories of the times that we had together as husband and wife. Patricia.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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You have very well described a loving relationship between a husband and a wife. I enjoy this very much. I lost my husband almost 28 years ago and I still have fond memories of the times that we had together as husband and wife. Patricia.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Patricia,
thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and the kind words. I am happy you like it :) Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sensual, yet innocent. I enjoyed reading. Once again, you presented up with a wonderful package. We can come to expect it from you. LOL Thank you for always living up to it.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Sensual, yet innocent. I enjoyed reading. Once again, you presented up with a wonderful package. We can come to expect it from you. LOL Thank you for always living up to it.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Barbara,
thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and the kind words. I am happy you like it :) Have a wonderful day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and this is ONE hot poetry poem; those Japanese really had it going on. No women have this problem with me hanging around like a love-starved stray puppy!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and this is ONE hot poetry poem; those Japanese really had it going on. No women have this problem with me hanging around like a love-starved stray puppy!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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LoL I love stray puppies
Mike,
thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and the kind words. I am happy you like it :) Have a wonderful day or night.
I'm curious, did you watch the trump circus and court appearance? I wonder if anything will come of it, but seeing him in court is very satisfying. Sadly, trump is doing what he does best, pressing his base for money, he has raised 10 million dollars.... what a creep. He is going to be seen as a victim. will see....
Gypsy hugs
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Yep, playing the victim card, so predictable
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I listened to his speech for 5 minutes and it was the same bullshit. He is insulting the DA and judge. He should have given Trump a Gag order but there's the freedom of speech law... Alvin bragg is doing what the attorney General should have done long ago.
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It still sounds to me that Jack Smith is still building his case. I don't know why it took so long for Garland to start, but I've heard nothing to make me think he's not going to charge Trump when the case it done
Comment from royowen
O yes this is decidedly provocatively written, there's no mistaking where this is heading, but the language is terrific, it comes from your considerable adept use of great words, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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O yes this is decidedly provocatively written, there's no mistaking where this is heading, but the language is terrific, it comes from your considerable adept use of great words, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Tanka is mostly romantic by nature. It was used in the Emperial Court in the 16th century where lovers wrote a short poem for eachother.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Yep well done
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a symbolic lily flower in the end. It's sexual yet beautiful. The expression on the young woman's face is priceless. I enjoy your tankas a lot and hope your book of Tanka poems will come out soon, at the end of the year?
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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What a symbolic lily flower in the end. It's sexual yet beautiful. The expression on the young woman's face is priceless. I enjoy your tankas a lot and hope your book of Tanka poems will come out soon, at the end of the year?
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an intimate and touching write about missing the gentle touch of a partner and those memories of an intimate encounter haunt this young lady, a sensual write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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This is an intimate and touching write about missing the gentle touch of a partner and those memories of an intimate encounter haunt this young lady, a sensual write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very lovely poem! I also appreciate your notes below tells me a lot about the writ's very good. I mean you're definitely major talented! Such a sweet memory that would be for anyone who's loving your partner and what they do together.
It's a nice warm fuzzy feeling thank you for that!
And as usual your work is meticulous correction really? There's not much critique or suggestion for change that I could offer you that you wouldn't have thought of long before me having said that I can. Appreciate your efforts in every way and I look very much for our tear next submission. Thank you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Very lovely poem! I also appreciate your notes below tells me a lot about the writ's very good. I mean you're definitely major talented! Such a sweet memory that would be for anyone who's loving your partner and what they do together.
It's a nice warm fuzzy feeling thank you for that!
And as usual your work is meticulous correction really? There's not much critique or suggestion for change that I could offer you that you wouldn't have thought of long before me having said that I can. Appreciate your efforts in every way and I look very much for our tear next submission. Thank you have a great evening!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
