Comment from Alaskastory

Excellent

"Made in his Image" tells an interesting story that is touched with small samples of humor. The description of Mary's father and, by the words he spoke, adds a real grasping story.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks Marie! Happy Easter.

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This was a delightful read. It seems the young people of every generation are likely to repeat certain things. Only the tiniest of fixes: The pastor made it clear that cute sixteen-year-old Mary new (change new to knew)


You don't ever take her for ride on it cause you could kill her quick as lightening. (change lightening to lightning)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks Crystie, and as always for helping me make it better!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nice story about the bus ministry at the church that you were attending. I enjoyed listening to it, and it flowed very well. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

If that's a picture of you, you were one fine looking young man. I have to tell you my personal opinion, so please excuse my directness. I have the picture you have with the mask. I prefer looking at the real thing. I've been wanting to tell you that since I first saw the pic. You did a fine job with this chapter. Enjoy your afternoon. Shirley

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks again Shirley

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine story here and I enjoyed the ride. I hope all went well with the new girl and your Father approved. Even though we make our way in the world when we return home everything seems to remain the same and the power of parents takes over, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks Dolly!

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Live wires always have a charge. Sounds as if you just touched one. They will do it. Glad you found a church to keep you busy. Good post, Stan. Blessing

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023

Thanks again Ben. Have a blessed Easter!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Isn't that wonderful? I think that your testimony is a great one. I love the fact that you stared a mini revival in the church, and that you created a hope when that hope was dying, and met a man, who I understand, loved his girls as I love mine, and wanted the best for them. Beautifully written Stan, blessings Roy
Typo : Don't ever take her for (a) ride...

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023

Thanks so much. When I think back and reflect myself after all these years it dawns on me that there was a remarkable awakening.

reply by royowen on 03-Apr-2023

I agree

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Mary certainly knew what she wanted and had every intention of going after it. You must have ended up marrying her since you say she will verify what happened is true. It sounds you are responsible for keeping that church afloat. I know you were pleased to know that you dad was proud of you for going ino the airforce. This is well written and interesting.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023

thanks Beth. Many more twist n turns