Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author.
I liked the image, the rhyme, and the epitaph.
You left readers wondering what he did and why
he was smilin'.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This made me smile and I loved this little humorous poem for the witty epitaph contest, I expect he is now enjoying himself as a ghost now taunting the Queen of Hearts, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023

Thanks!

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

hmm... interesting... this leaves me with many questions
like, why was he trying to get the wonderland and how did he die?

fun epitaph
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023

Thanks!