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A Poetic Mystery

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Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Lea, You write with such a passionate mind. I can already see the fight going on between the host and the Sorceress, and heaven forbid she escapes. Nice artwork also

Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much Chrissy! I appreciate your feedback! Grateful for your time and kind comments! I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sounds a bit scary as we harbour thoughts of revenge perhaps and when we let go of our inhibitions and let the sorceress free all hell breaks loose, a poignant write Lea, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Ty Dolly!
Comment from royowen
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An excellent short narrative with a terrifically conceived piece of artwork which gives the narrative a fair bit of punch, well done with this great post, good job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
    Ty Roy
reply by royowen on 02-Apr-2023
    Well done