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Comment from
Chrissy710
Hi Lea, You write with such a passionate mind. I can already see the fight going on between the host and the Sorceress, and heaven forbid she escapes. Nice artwork also
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
Thank you so much Chrissy! I appreciate your feedback! Grateful for your time and kind comments! I hope you have a great day!
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
This sounds a bit scary as we harbour thoughts of revenge perhaps and when we let go of our inhibitions and let the sorceress free all hell breaks loose, a poignant write Lea, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
Comment from
royowen
An excellent short narrative with a terrifically conceived piece of artwork which gives the narrative a fair bit of punch, well done with this great post, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
reply by royowen on 02-Apr-2023
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