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NaPoWriMo 2023

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Comment from royowen
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We've got a very long coastline, I think it's actually about 20,000 kms long with many shipwrecks, but we do have strategically placed lighthouses, but prabably not as many as the US, well done Alicia, keep going, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
    Australia has 350 lighthouses
    New Zealand has 23 lighthouses

    Thank you :)
reply by royowen on 04-Apr-2023
    That?s interesting
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I adore lighthouses, even though they have become obsolete these days, they are beacons of light on the map of the world, I enjoyed your tribute to them here Alicia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
    They are mostly automated, thanks to cellular technology... However, still have to be there as a Plan B. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Alicia, great to see you in NaPoWriMo again. This sounds like a most interesting theme as you will have lots to explore and wax poetically.

Lighthouses are most interesting. Wishing you great inspiration with the project.

Gloria

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
    You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for the fun facts about the lighthouses! I didn't know that the United States had the most lighthouses! I like that you called them "Historical navigational treasures."
Suggestions :
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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
    Thanks for the edit note. Thank you :)
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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This is really good you've put some good effort into this I'm quite impressed! And I can certainly appreciate your subject matter as lighthouses are in fact ancient Inventions back beginning with the Egyptians and the pharaohs created by Cleopatra If I am not mistaken. Probably eaten older than that I would imagine. Having said that I find your work to be aesthetically pleasing structurally sound, good spelling and well written! I thank you for your submission and look forward to more have a great night!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Ricky1024
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
Note: It's always nice to learn more and new things.
From this part of South Jersey on Long Beach Island and a town called Barnegat Light.
There is a old lighthouse Right along the water line that they have Entitled,
"Old Barney"
It's nice to just climb up and venture upward looking out over the Atlantic Ocean.
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Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
    You're nice. Good memories you have. Lighthouses are great. I like lighthouses, but only remember the one on the potato chip bag. Thank you :)