Regrets....
Monostich5 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
Love is what everyone needs from dawn of life to it's sun set. Your one line poem is superb and conveys the inner need of every creature. I enjoyed reading it. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Love is what everyone needs from dawn of life to it's sun set. Your one line poem is superb and conveys the inner need of every creature. I enjoyed reading it. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hello my friend, I thank you for your time and am glad that you like the write.
Comment from Mark D. R.
A most compelling presentation for this contest entry!
Many of do likely wonder of lost or forgotten love interests at the end of our lives.
Edit suggestion: drop the comma after "still." IMHO it breaks the feeling you want to share.
Mark
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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A most compelling presentation for this contest entry!
Many of do likely wonder of lost or forgotten love interests at the end of our lives.
Edit suggestion: drop the comma after "still." IMHO it breaks the feeling you want to share.
Mark
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hello Mark, my friend, as always I appreciate your time and encouraging review; corrected as suggested, thank you.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a really great one liner. It is so very sad. The artwork and the words match so perfectly. I think this should do. Very well in the competition. Good luck. Jen.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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This is a really great one liner. It is so very sad. The artwork and the words match so perfectly. I think this should do. Very well in the competition. Good luck. Jen.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hello Jen, I appreciate your time and the kind review, thank you.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an excellent entry for the one line poem. It is simple and yet hauntingly sad and lonely. Much can be gleaned from this short line. Great job and good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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This is an excellent entry for the one line poem. It is simple and yet hauntingly sad and lonely. Much can be gleaned from this short line. Great job and good luck.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the great review, thank you.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Aw.... I don't think for longing for love ever goes away. Even when there are those around us who do, we seek it on a regular basis. So must we also give it. It is the only thing in life and death got matters.
I enjoy your online p*** very much and find it to be a fine submission. I also like the picture goes well with it too. I see no changes to be done and I wish you luck in the contest and forward to your next submission. I have an awesome day!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Aw.... I don't think for longing for love ever goes away. Even when there are those around us who do, we seek it on a regular basis. So must we also give it. It is the only thing in life and death got matters.
I enjoy your online p*** very much and find it to be a fine submission. I also like the picture goes well with it too. I see no changes to be done and I wish you luck in the contest and forward to your next submission. I have an awesome day!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Hello Lea, so kind of you to review the poem; I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.