T'was Burp without the B
Another Day Without My Medication8 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a fun story. I can picture a young boy all dressed in his cowboy duds and riding Rockin' in a hard chase for the bad guys. Urp is going to tame the wild West and make it safe for all of us.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
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This is a fun story. I can picture a young boy all dressed in his cowboy duds and riding Rockin' in a hard chase for the bad guys. Urp is going to tame the wild West and make it safe for all of us.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
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Thank you WJ for your kind words. They are much appreciated.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Had to see who this Bob Cullen was as the USA had a game show host bearing that name, and was glad to read URP. Very funny.
gyhyduuguhkj;jghh - there. I met the CEC requirements for 150 characters.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Had to see who this Bob Cullen was as the USA had a game show host bearing that name, and was glad to read URP. Very funny.
gyhyduuguhkj;jghh - there. I met the CEC requirements for 150 characters.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Semi-colon aside, that word, phrase whatever it was, very closely resembles the written Waradjuri aborigonal language. This tribe was centred around Central Australia near Ayers Rock, I think.
Seriously, thanks for another great review.
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Bet it was disappointing to discover the truth, Bob Cullen is really an 'amazing' Aussie Poet. AMAZING I wasn't know how to spell DICKHEAD.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a great, fun-packed verse! I loved this. And apologies for being slow to get the name until the fourth stanza. The flow and rhyming are well done - I particularly like the Earp/twerp one and the humour just leaves me with a smile on my face - always welcome on a grey, rainy morning! Excellent - we need more of these! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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What a great, fun-packed verse! I loved this. And apologies for being slow to get the name until the fourth stanza. The flow and rhyming are well done - I particularly like the Earp/twerp one and the humour just leaves me with a smile on my face - always welcome on a grey, rainy morning! Excellent - we need more of these! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Debbi, i'm a little worried about you and your rating of poetry. Calling this excellent, makes me think you confused the word excellent with something else. Seriously thank you for reading and commenting. It is much appreciated.
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Don't be so modest! Your verse is still playing in my head while most of others here on this site are long gone!
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Thank you, Debbie for such an uplifting reply. I appreciate your comment immensely.
Comment from shelley kaye
lol this was a cute funny little rhyming story
like his name it's a simple imaginative poem
nicely done!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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lol this was a cute funny little rhyming story
like his name it's a simple imaginative poem
nicely done!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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I've already replied to this twice, but it keeps coming up unreviewed. So, allow me to try again. I really appreciate your stopping by and reviewing my moment of madness. I'm delighted to find someone who understands my irreverence. Thank you.
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This is what happens when you misplace your medication. But it was fun writing it.
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😂😂
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well this is very humorous, Bob, I enjoyed it very much. I enjoy the westerns on TV mainly because they don't have the cursing that all the new works have now. When I hear that F word, I quickly change the channel. I watch a lot of Blue Bloods too. LOL Well done. This is a hoot. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Well this is very humorous, Bob, I enjoyed it very much. I enjoy the westerns on TV mainly because they don't have the cursing that all the new works have now. When I hear that F word, I quickly change the channel. I watch a lot of Blue Bloods too. LOL Well done. This is a hoot. Nancy:)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Nancy your reply has made my day. I must confess this is my third attempt at responding to your most complimentary review, but for some reason, quiet possibly replier's incompetence it doesn't send. And if it happens again, you may well hear an outraged Aussie mouthing obscenities. Sadly. I don't know any words starting with F.
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Thank you for taking it as it was intended, a piece of fun.
Comment from royowen
You have a great sense of humour Bob, and you show that you're a good literary raconteur, and also a skilful poet, as this work proves. With mostly on meter and heptameter with rhyming couplets, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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You have a great sense of humour Bob, and you show that you're a good literary raconteur, and also a skilful poet, as this work proves. With mostly on meter and heptameter with rhyming couplets, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Gee, I'm having problems getting these replies sent. They keep coming back unsent. Thank you, as always for your gracious replies, they feed an ego that requires no encouragement. May I get in one week early and offer you and your Family a very Happy Easter, Happy Easter
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The same to you and yours Bob
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What a lovely reply. Being occasionally on meter is a new experience for me, I'm not usually that close. But I have fun with my poetry and I hope to get better. Especially with your help.
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Well done
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
A very cute and enjoyable poem. Very descriptive. Good humor, and colorful descriptions.i njoyed reading it. It closed easily. I used to teach Reading and I can't figure out how Earp and Urp sound the same or need to both exist, but they do. Excellent! :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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A very cute and enjoyable poem. Very descriptive. Good humor, and colorful descriptions.i njoyed reading it. It closed easily. I used to teach Reading and I can't figure out how Earp and Urp sound the same or need to both exist, but they do. Excellent! :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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You have a great name that would sit well on a book cover. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Your comments were greatly appreciated, specially the 'cute and enjoyable.'
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My name would st least fit Thank you! My maiden name was Alexandra Androulidakis. I would have inlu been able to author children's BIG books, with that name, I believe. I always give the story beneath the story; I'm an open book and enough with the literary pubs already, right? :)
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That you Alexandra for your EXCELLENT comment. It is much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed my attempt at homor.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This had me doubled up laughing Bob and I throughly enjoyed your humour here about Wyatt Earp, the Lawman. A well rhymed and funny poem, I was entertained, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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This had me doubled up laughing Bob and I throughly enjoyed your humour here about Wyatt Earp, the Lawman. A well rhymed and funny poem, I was entertained, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Your replies are always complimentary. And very much appreciated. I delighted to know you saw my attempt at humour.
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It was fun to write, glad you caught my attempt at fun. Glad you liked it.