Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Stone by Stone"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
7 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
This is my favorite chapter of your writing, so far. I liked the fact that the author dropped in to explain petroglyphs. I also like that there is one character, sharing her thoughts and feeling and triumphing over her obstacles. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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This is my favorite chapter of your writing, so far. I liked the fact that the author dropped in to explain petroglyphs. I also like that there is one character, sharing her thoughts and feeling and triumphing over her obstacles. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. It occurred to me as you remark about the triumphing. When I took a children's literature course, we learned good children's lit is when one of the 'weak' characters takes challenges in hand & triumphs. This is good children's lit...thank you for pointing that out.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Some interesting information about petroglyphs which I have to admit I had never heard of! I like the emphasis on Bea's love of co-operation and working as a group. The image of the three crossing the stream is delightful!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Some interesting information about petroglyphs which I have to admit I had never heard of! I like the emphasis on Bea's love of co-operation and working as a group. The image of the three crossing the stream is delightful!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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What a lovely review. Thank you so much. I'm glad you are appreciating Bea. If you want to check out any previous chapter, feel free. There is no need for a review. Just enjoy.
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Best wishes!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
The adventures of Bea.... The subject matter of your story and the interesting references to Petroglyphs and carvings in stone as well as charcoal paintings an interesting subject to me more than most. Or thank or ancient is of fascination to myself and speak to things. I like to learn about we here in Canada also have Petroglyphs but in different form.
This chapter you have written in fact a whole book that you have begun. Seems. Like you? Have. Done a? Lot of work with it not only if you have the story. But you also have historical references which must be researched this kind of work I can appreciate.
I can see no issues with sentence structure, punctuation, spelling or subject matter. You look forward to your next submission!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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The adventures of Bea.... The subject matter of your story and the interesting references to Petroglyphs and carvings in stone as well as charcoal paintings an interesting subject to me more than most. Or thank or ancient is of fascination to myself and speak to things. I like to learn about we here in Canada also have Petroglyphs but in different form.
This chapter you have written in fact a whole book that you have begun. Seems. Like you? Have. Done a? Lot of work with it not only if you have the story. But you also have historical references which must be researched this kind of work I can appreciate.
I can see no issues with sentence structure, punctuation, spelling or subject matter. You look forward to your next submission!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. If you want to check out any previous chapter, feel free. There is no need for a review. Just enjoy.
Ancient is of fascination to me too. I actually have many Native American (Wabenaki) stones within my little neighborhood. I've worked them into my books. This is my 3rd Bea book.
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For sure would love to take a look! love that kind of stuff tell yourself and awesome day!
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Cool..enjoy...no reviews necessary.
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic continuation chapter, Liz. I am so glad that Bea was so very surprised about meeting Snakely or Spidie as new friends. She did have slight reluctance but overcame that. Very well done n greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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This was a fantastic continuation chapter, Liz. I am so glad that Bea was so very surprised about meeting Snakely or Spidie as new friends. She did have slight reluctance but overcame that. Very well done n greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Once again, thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have never seen real petroglyph only pictures of them. Thank you for sharing.
however the larger sizzing sounding voice was motionless. (comma after 'however' & and 'sizing' or 'sizzling')
Her newfound friend blended with or was as we call it, camouflaged, the same color as the grass. (no comma needed after 'camouflaged')
closing with Bea exclaiming how pleased she was meet both of them. (meeting)
Bea stopped in midstep. (mid-step)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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I have never seen real petroglyph only pictures of them. Thank you for sharing.
however the larger sizzing sounding voice was motionless. (comma after 'however' & and 'sizing' or 'sizzling')
Her newfound friend blended with or was as we call it, camouflaged, the same color as the grass. (no comma needed after 'camouflaged')
closing with Bea exclaiming how pleased she was meet both of them. (meeting)
Bea stopped in midstep. (mid-step)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your alert review. I appreciate it. It is eventually to be published. It will make my book so much better quality.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very interesting story, and I enjoyed listening to it. I do wish you the very best in all of your writing. I have never seen the Petro gloves I have heard of them. I have seen pictures of them, but I have never personally seen them. I wish you the very best in all of your life. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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This is a very interesting story, and I enjoyed listening to it. I do wish you the very best in all of your writing. I have never seen the Petro gloves I have heard of them. I have seen pictures of them, but I have never personally seen them. I wish you the very best in all of your life. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. f you have not read any of the previous chapters, There is no need for a review, just enjoy.
Comment from lyenochka
I liked your reference to the petroglyph and am impressed that Bea would know about that. I am glad she made friends with Snakeley and Spidie and helped them cross the water while overcoming her own fears and even her negative preconceived notions about snakes!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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I liked your reference to the petroglyph and am impressed that Bea would know about that. I am glad she made friends with Snakeley and Spidie and helped them cross the water while overcoming her own fears and even her negative preconceived notions about snakes!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Are you still traveling?
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Yes, won't head home until tomorrow night. It's a challenge to do the poem-a-day this month!
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I'm sure...you are keeping your muses busy
