Ancient Art of Poetry
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
What an interesting poem about the male violence. Yes. I totally agree. We, women should be leaders. These men are too irresponsible and power hunger. Their tiny brain can't think of the consequences.
I like your usage of words.
Excellent and good luck. I will enter one, too.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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What an interesting poem about the male violence. Yes. I totally agree. We, women should be leaders. These men are too irresponsible and power hunger. Their tiny brain can't think of the consequences.
I like your usage of words.
Excellent and good luck. I will enter one, too.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Wow thank you for your amazing review, for your interesting critique and take on everything that you read and approach with an eager eye! I completely agree with you too. We gotta shut this shack down. Women are a little bit more peaceable and entertain ideas other than their own which makes us and our minds ever expanding. I hope that one day we as men and women collaborate together rather than apart. Generally speaking of course. Thank you again for your amazing review and for the great rating we have yourself an awesome evening!
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You, too. You are a great poet. Have a great evening and weekend.
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Back atcha!
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your verse- good picture presentation supporting your theme- I support you impressions of Putin's war- motives of power, hate and greed- ' creates hell ' on innocence- have family in both countries- Good Job
AP
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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I like your verse- good picture presentation supporting your theme- I support you impressions of Putin's war- motives of power, hate and greed- ' creates hell ' on innocence- have family in both countries- Good Job
AP
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your review my hope your family is OK. I hope they're safe but that must be scary for you! I thank you for your review and your insight and your kind words always appreciate it. I hope all is well remains well with your family have a good evening!
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Thank you Lea- bless
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a powerful and sincerely expressed poem, its message all the stronger, in my opinion, because of its form as a nonet, listing the horrors of Putin and ending with 'hell.' The author's emotion on this subject is palpable and there is nothing that I would suggest needs further work. Thank you for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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This is a powerful and sincerely expressed poem, its message all the stronger, in my opinion, because of its form as a nonet, listing the horrors of Putin and ending with 'hell.' The author's emotion on this subject is palpable and there is nothing that I would suggest needs further work. Thank you for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Thank you Debbie so much for your kind review! Very thankful for your thoughts and for your Time and insight!
Very much appreciate that thank you again I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Ricky1024
Deeply written this Nonet.
Vladimir Putin is leaving office and he knows it.
Yes, and he wants to leave his mark.
Just like all the other criminals that have gone in office in the past.
From Lenin to Stalin they all murdered millions.
He probably thinks he's going to go out even bigger than Attila the Hun.
But what he doesn't know is Adolf Hitler is waiting in Hell too.
Yes, with a knife to shove it right in his back!
Thanks for sharing your Mile post and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Deeply written this Nonet.
Vladimir Putin is leaving office and he knows it.
Yes, and he wants to leave his mark.
Just like all the other criminals that have gone in office in the past.
From Lenin to Stalin they all murdered millions.
He probably thinks he's going to go out even bigger than Attila the Hun.
But what he doesn't know is Adolf Hitler is waiting in Hell too.
Yes, with a knife to shove it right in his back!
Thanks for sharing your Mile post and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Thank you again so much as usual you hit the nail on the head! I appreciate your thoughts and insight and also your time and attention I'd always welcome. Thanks again!
Comment from Julie Lau
A very powerful poem, Tea, on a very topical subject. The image is also powerful, albeit gruesome. I wish you all the best in the competition. Yours, Julie Lau
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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A very powerful poem, Tea, on a very topical subject. The image is also powerful, albeit gruesome. I wish you all the best in the competition. Yours, Julie Lau
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Thank you julie for your kind words I really appreciate it! For time and thoughtful always welcome! I hope your day is great!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Wow. If there could ever bring a beautiful sound, to such a dreadful topic, I heard it. To me, I sensed the anger we all have, or should have, the frustration about how Putin started this, and has been contacting this horrific war, and yes, it is nothing less than hell. I often remind myself that, if I get sick just hearing about what's happening, or watching clips on the news, then just how much more if a hell are the Ukrainian people still enduring.
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Wow. If there could ever bring a beautiful sound, to such a dreadful topic, I heard it. To me, I sensed the anger we all have, or should have, the frustration about how Putin started this, and has been contacting this horrific war, and yes, it is nothing less than hell. I often remind myself that, if I get sick just hearing about what's happening, or watching clips on the news, then just how much more if a hell are the Ukrainian people still enduring.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much alexandra for your keen and inside for review. And you are absolutely right? I try in my way with spotlight on those things that you keep doing oh and over again expecting different results. And we have seen putin many times throughout history under different names. Thank you so much for your time and for your thoughts and I wish you a great day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow Lea, this is a powerful and damaging write about the Ukrainian war and the one man crusade behind all the killing and devastation. A fine nonet that sends a shiver down my spine, congratulations on your 50th post, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Wow Lea, this is a powerful and damaging write about the Ukrainian war and the one man crusade behind all the killing and devastation. A fine nonet that sends a shiver down my spine, congratulations on your 50th post, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Thank you Dolly! I wanted to do contribute my voice somehow. I thank you for your fine review and for your time and comments. Yes you're waiting thank you so much! Yeah that creep poop and it's gotta go
