Reviews from

Flowers

A short poem

8 total reviews 
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

"Flowers"
This was well written, Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
Just in time for Spring!
Raul, shall I write the Book?
Together with You?
Doctor Ricky
First Chapter Entitled, "Flowering Easter for You"

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Thanks! Maybe.
reply by Ricky1024 on 31-Mar-2023
Comment from LateBloomer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Raul, you are so correct. Flowers do brighten the day, and they are a delight to view. You've penned a happy poem. Well done. A delight to read. Margaret ~ LateBloomer

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from nomi338
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Beautiful flowers are a gift from God. His way of saying to his people, I love you. They are not only pleasing to look at they provide a wonderful aroma to brighten up what might be a dull and dreadful day.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from Nicki Nance
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

... And your thoughtful comments about those flowers is a delight to read. I want to get some right now. Thanks for the pleasant, optimistic read. We'll done.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Thanks and for the compliment!
Comment from AP Apgar
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I like your poem- makes an interesting statement about flowers being beautiful- suggest you could enhance your work in the poetic sense by using a picture presentation as a visual supplement? Also using metaphors to describe gives statements a poetic tone- and ...using notes to clarify in some cases- all opportunities to better convey your poetry message - good job AP

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a nice dedication to flowers. They certainly do brighten our world with all their wonderful varieties and colors. My grandparents had beautiful flower gardens. Unfortunately, my father's allergies prevented us from having too many flowers around. Maybe that it is why I appreciate them so much, because we couldn't have them.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from Boogienights
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very nicely said. My favorite flowers are lilacs and violets. What's your favorite. Those 2 flowers remind me of my mom, who loved them as well. I always love your positive outlook on things.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Thanks! My favorite are Orchids.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I so agree with you here, fresh flowers can give a room a magical glow and I enjoyed your fine praise of flowers here, we are moving into a season of wonderful appreciation of flowers, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Thanks!