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Taste of My Reality

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The Pathway to Pain and Misery

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Comment from strandregs
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A taste of your reality is nectar of gods.
A mortifying mystery to my feeble mind.
I like the mix of fact and metaphor
and lapping literature on my peace seeking shore. :-))Z.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    I thank you so very very much for coming into the Twilight zone of my life.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I just got word that my best friends grandson died early this morning in a motorcycle accident.

Free to again. (omit 'to', it doesn't make sense with it there)

God, knows for this is now. (omit the comma you are not addressing God this time.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Thanks for stopping by. Barbara and I will go back in time to fix this.
    I'm sorry to hear your friends grandson died in a motorcycle accident.
    I've been in a couple but I got lucky.
    Ricky