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Blood-Drenched Easter

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3 total reviews 
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Oh my goodness heart-wrenching. Poor little lamb.

Nicely done!

This is a terrific entry. It should do well.

I've been very behind on reviewing sorryð???lol.

-Kerry

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Ciao Kerry,

    No problem.

    No, it got one vote from someone but I expected that .. most prefer to eat lamb. ( sigh )

    This was posted 2 weeks ago .. you are slightly behind but that is no issue. ( wink)

    What you need to do is post your April fairy poems in time.
    one every day .

    posting 2/3 or more together you don't make the most of your imaginative poetry.

    Keep safe !


reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 17-Apr-2023
    lol.You're welcome.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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Very educational and emotional plea for the protection of animals. The poem is an eye opener, especially now that we are celebrating Easter in a week!
Well done!
Mario

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    That s why I wrote it , hoping my words touch others .Many are not aware of the sufferings these gentle creature face.

    Thank you for reviewing my wee poem!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This tetractys poem, Blood-drenched Easter, has the proper formatting and seeks a peek at the lambs taken to the slaughter so that others may ironically celebrate mercy.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Mercy? There is none cause there is no respect for life.

    Many people don t even go to church or pray/ speak to God , they swear etc but then they insist , like so good Christians, on eating lamb for Easter.

    A sheep can live up to 10 /12 years but these poor lambs within 12 weeks are killed .

    Their suffering are atrocious.


    Mankind is always inflicting pain on its own kind and on animals.

    Thanks for taking time to read and review my wee poem.

    Keep safe!

    PS: your avatar , it that one of those scary creatures that live in the abyss?

reply by Bill Schott on 31-Mar-2023
    Sea worm.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Never heard of them ..will google and check them out.

    Keep safe ! 🍀