Comment from Jamie Stittsworth

Excellent

I liked the overall message. I thought it was set up using great imagery. I personally, liked the fact that it glorifies God as well as sends a message of his love to the readers.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023

Thanks! I agree with you!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What an interesting style you did well.
Mystery Author. This was a great way to
share you faith. Great job with the rules.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thanks!

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023

Guess what? I have won first place!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective descriptive words and phrases to open the poem.
-Good connection with Him being in your heart
to "answering your prayers."
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thanks! 🙂

reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Mar-2023

You are welcome😊

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

The message of your poem is truthful and encouraging. However, I believe this contest calls for five lines of poetry. Also, the final line needs ten syllables, and you currently have nine. You probably have time to edit and resubmit before the deadline.
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Your revised poem is so much stronger! Nice job.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you for your help and kind review! I have made the corrections. Is it better for a five stars rating? Can you please take another look?

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023

Thanks!