My Daughter- In -Law
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Comment from Heather Knight
It's really nice of you to dedicate your poem to your daughter-in-law. She sounds like a great woman.
It's not always easy to get on well with our in-laws so you must have done something right.
Thanks for sharing.
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It's really nice of you to dedicate your poem to your daughter-in-law. She sounds like a great woman.
It's not always easy to get on well with our in-laws so you must have done something right.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent sonnet poem about your daughter in law.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent sonnet poem about your daughter in law.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from jenintorre
How great to have a good daughter in law. You are very lucky. It is so comforting to know that your son is being looked after. Take care. Best wishes. Jen.
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How great to have a good daughter in law. You are very lucky. It is so comforting to know that your son is being looked after. Take care. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Your note and poem are appreciated, jaybird.
-I am glad you have such a great daughter-in-law.
-You wrote a good tribute to her.
-She has many good qualities and a lasting marriage.
-It is good she and her husband can work together
when it is needed.
-A very nice closing couplet.
-Have a great day and rest of your week.
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-Your note and poem are appreciated, jaybird.
-I am glad you have such a great daughter-in-law.
-You wrote a good tribute to her.
-She has many good qualities and a lasting marriage.
-It is good she and her husband can work together
when it is needed.
-A very nice closing couplet.
-Have a great day and rest of your week.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am also blessed with great daughter-in-laws, three to be exact. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with us.
meets the daily storns, stress and strife. (storms)
Hubby, kids, grand kids fill with pride, (grandkids)
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I am also blessed with great daughter-in-laws, three to be exact. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with us.
meets the daily storns, stress and strife. (storms)
Hubby, kids, grand kids fill with pride, (grandkids)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from jmdg1954
It's a great tribute to you and your daughter-in-law to have such a relationship. The words in your poem echo the feeling that jumps off the page as I read this.
I hope you've shared it with her...
Cheers to great in-laws.
John
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It's a great tribute to you and your daughter-in-law to have such a relationship. The words in your poem echo the feeling that jumps off the page as I read this.
I hope you've shared it with her...
Cheers to great in-laws.
John
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a wonderful tribute to your daughter-in-law, I hope she gets to read your beautiful poem. She sounds like an angel, I loved your well rhymed poem, love Dolly x
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What a wonderful tribute to your daughter-in-law, I hope she gets to read your beautiful poem. She sounds like an angel, I loved your well rhymed poem, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Are you making these mistakes for some reason? Your poems are written usually without errors. So glad that you found a wonderful daughter-in-law that you can love and cherish.
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Are you making these mistakes for some reason? Your poems are written usually without errors. So glad that you found a wonderful daughter-in-law that you can love and cherish.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
