My Daughter- In -Law
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Comment from Jim Wile
Well, that's a very sweet poem. She sounds like a peach, and your son was lucky to find her. I think it's wonderful when a parent can really come to love a daughter-in-law or son-in-law the way you have. I'm sure this poem made her day.
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Well, that's a very sweet poem. She sounds like a peach, and your son was lucky to find her. I think it's wonderful when a parent can really come to love a daughter-in-law or son-in-law the way you have. I'm sure this poem made her day.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jay,
This sonnet is a nice ode you your daughter-in-law. It seems like she has added to your love and has had a good life.
In the first stanza. storns should be storms.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi Jay,
This sonnet is a nice ode you your daughter-in-law. It seems like she has added to your love and has had a good life.
In the first stanza. storns should be storms.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
Comment from Aussie
Sometimes a son or daughter not of your loins is far better than one that is. It is kind of you to write about her. She will stand by your side when you need her and love you when she sees it's time. K xx
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Sometimes a son or daughter not of your loins is far better than one that is. It is kind of you to write about her. She will stand by your side when you need her and love you when she sees it's time. K xx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
Comment from G0dd0ll
Your poetry always brings a smile to my face. I enjoy looking for it. Reading this one made me wonder if your family knew just how lucky they are to have you. But I bet they do! Kudos
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Your poetry always brings a smile to my face. I enjoy looking for it. Reading this one made me wonder if your family knew just how lucky they are to have you. But I bet they do! Kudos
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice tribute to your daughter-in-law, Jay. Many times, in-laws don't get along that well. I am fairly lucky, but probably not as lucky as you are.
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Very nice tribute to your daughter-in-law, Jay. Many times, in-laws don't get along that well. I am fairly lucky, but probably not as lucky as you are.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
Comment from karenina
Sounds like you are both blessed to have one another in your life! How sweet of you to write a poem in her honor...
I'm certain she must love you a lot!
You prove the feeling is mutual...
Karenina
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Sounds like you are both blessed to have one another in your life! How sweet of you to write a poem in her honor...
I'm certain she must love you a lot!
You prove the feeling is mutual...
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so lovely, Jay, I'm glad you have her and your son near-by. Family is good, and we need to let them know how much they are appreciated. I'm sure your daughter-in-law will love this tribute you've written for her. Well done, my friend! :)) Sandra xx
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That is so lovely, Jay, I'm glad you have her and your son near-by. Family is good, and we need to let them know how much they are appreciated. I'm sure your daughter-in-law will love this tribute you've written for her. Well done, my friend! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I enjoyed this tribute to your daughter-in-law. She sounds like a wonderful asset to your family from your kind and loving words about her. Your son has a strong and loving life partner.
Why am I not surprised that you would take a moment to express how much she means to you and express your admiration for her?
Best wishes,
Mary
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I enjoyed this tribute to your daughter-in-law. She sounds like a wonderful asset to your family from your kind and loving words about her. Your son has a strong and loving life partner.
Why am I not surprised that you would take a moment to express how much she means to you and express your admiration for her?
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Jaybird, you are so blessed to have such a wonderful daughter-in-law in your life. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of special note:
When I need someone to adore-
I found it,won't look any more.
(J, don't mess with perfection.)
A poem of love, and a beautiful tribute to your daughter-in-law.
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
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Hello Jaybird, you are so blessed to have such a wonderful daughter-in-law in your life. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of special note:
When I need someone to adore-
I found it,won't look any more.
(J, don't mess with perfection.)
A poem of love, and a beautiful tribute to your daughter-in-law.
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoy reading your tributes to people and things you care about. You have clearly described your daughter-in-law in poetic rhyme, and told your readers why she is special. Congratulations to your son and his wife for fifty three years of marriage.
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I enjoy reading your tributes to people and things you care about. You have clearly described your daughter-in-law in poetic rhyme, and told your readers why she is special. Congratulations to your son and his wife for fifty three years of marriage.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
