The Bench: Aaron and Beetle
a script16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Got it! I like how we start off with Aaron introducing himself as Zocor, and the other man saying he looked like his brother Aaron, who he is. But, does that mean this is that other chap's brother? Now I have to find out about who the next person Aaron calls himself, before I get too confused!!! LOL :) Sandra
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Got it! I like how we start off with Aaron introducing himself as Zocor, and the other man saying he looked like his brother Aaron, who he is. But, does that mean this is that other chap's brother? Now I have to find out about who the next person Aaron calls himself, before I get too confused!!! LOL :) Sandra
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Aaron has issues.
Comment from judiverse
I guess I've been making my scripts too long. I really don't know what you're trying to do here. Aaron must be the focus as he seems able to appear as whoever he pleases. Beetle sees him as his brother and tormentor. Then he changes places with Beetle? Maybe I'm reading this too late. judi
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I guess I've been making my scripts too long. I really don't know what you're trying to do here. Aaron must be the focus as he seems able to appear as whoever he pleases. Beetle sees him as his brother and tormentor. Then he changes places with Beetle? Maybe I'm reading this too late. judi
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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It begins vague and will eventually make some kind of sense.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is funny and short. Your scripts are much simpler and easier to read than mine. The art is very nice. But where is Aaron? Is he a ghost?
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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This is funny and short. Your scripts are much simpler and easier to read than mine. The art is very nice. But where is Aaron? Is he a ghost?
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Lisa. Aaron is going through something.
Comment from Ulla
You have me intrigued here, Bill. So is the this the real Aron or is it some alter ego? I can't wait to.be reading in. I just wonder where you're taking this story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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You have me intrigued here, Bill. So is the this the real Aron or is it some alter ego? I can't wait to.be reading in. I just wonder where you're taking this story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Hope it turns out.
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I'm patient. I'll wait, lol. Ulla:)))
Comment from Spitfire
You clued me in on your last reply. Seems Aaron may have an alter ego.
I like your use of different colors for each speaker. An interesting idea for a script.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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You clued me in on your last reply. Seems Aaron may have an alter ego.
I like your use of different colors for each speaker. An interesting idea for a script.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Shari.
Comment from jmdg1954
Aaron and Beetle going a little toe to toe with each other. Typical brotherly banter in which they mock each other till one gets the best shot.
Good script. Short and concise.
John
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Aaron and Beetle going a little toe to toe with each other. Typical brotherly banter in which they mock each other till one gets the best shot.
Good script. Short and concise.
John
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you, John.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is interesting, even though my questions were not answered. Beetle is Aaron, and Aaron says he is Zocor. Will the real Aaron please stand up. My not understanding is intriguing. I have to follow until it all makes sense.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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This is interesting, even though my questions were not answered. Beetle is Aaron, and Aaron says he is Zocor. Will the real Aaron please stand up. My not understanding is intriguing. I have to follow until it all makes sense.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you, LJ.
Comment from lyenochka
This is getting even spookier. It's either a twilight zone episode or Aaron is hallucinating quite often. But if one imagined half of himself gets up and leaves, I'm not sure what remained.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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This is getting even spookier. It's either a twilight zone episode or Aaron is hallucinating quite often. But if one imagined half of himself gets up and leaves, I'm not sure what remained.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Hope it gets somewhere?
Comment from royowen
So, now I've met the other half of Calamity, poor old Aaron seems to be a little confused about who he is, heh heh, I think I should have read this one first. Well done Bill, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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So, now I've met the other half of Calamity, poor old Aaron seems to be a little confused about who he is, heh heh, I think I should have read this one first. Well done Bill, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Roy. I will give them a binding title.
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Well done
Comment from nomi338
Reminds me of a conversation I have with myself almost daily. One of us is a loser, the other an accuser. Alternatively a boozer. and a poor chooser. Mom was very disappointed, because she wanted a pony.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Reminds me of a conversation I have with myself almost daily. One of us is a loser, the other an accuser. Alternatively a boozer. and a poor chooser. Mom was very disappointed, because she wanted a pony.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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My mom bottle fed me because she wanted to just be friends.
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I can relate.
