Waddle, Waddle, Waddle
One More Moment Of Madness8 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is totally bonkers, Bob! But didn't you have fun writing it:) Once again I'm reading that irresistible humour and your capacity to put it into a fun and very readable poem. Your rhyming is great. Sometimes you might forfeit the rhythm to the rhyme so it gets a bit bumpy but, hey, I'm not complaining. Once again you made me smile! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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This is totally bonkers, Bob! But didn't you have fun writing it:) Once again I'm reading that irresistible humour and your capacity to put it into a fun and very readable poem. Your rhyming is great. Sometimes you might forfeit the rhythm to the rhyme so it gets a bit bumpy but, hey, I'm not complaining. Once again you made me smile! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Yes, Debbie, I did have fun writing this with my favourite associate, a friend named Jack Daniels. He helps me when I become confused. Thanks for the review
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You see you even make me laugh with your replies..:))
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I did have fun writing this. I had also stopped taking my medication.
Comment from w.j.debi
This is quite a story and I love all the added repetition of 'waddle' and 'quack' to add humor and tempo to the drama. It seems that youngest one was very hungry while he waited in his cell.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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This is quite a story and I love all the added repetition of 'waddle' and 'quack' to add humor and tempo to the drama. It seems that youngest one was very hungry while he waited in his cell.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for a complimentary review. I'm delighted to know you found the poem humorous. Your review has mase my night.
Comment from royowen
What a most creative post Bob. A great romp with some hilarious moment, trying to rworl who was dad's wife from the Mumma pursuing carnal delights, some great themes woven in the midst of some hanky panky and some great moments in good rhyme, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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What a most creative post Bob. A great romp with some hilarious moment, trying to rworl who was dad's wife from the Mumma pursuing carnal delights, some great themes woven in the midst of some hanky panky and some great moments in good rhyme, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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A most creative post, wow, what a compliment. I really appreciate your taking time to read and review my work. You sir are one of the reason's this site is so good.
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Bless you Bob
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I haven't the foggiest notion what is happening here within. Is it a duck? I'm led to believe with the waddle, waddle, waddle, but ducks don't eat meat, and why the mouse?
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I haven't the foggiest notion what is happening here within. Is it a duck? I'm led to believe with the waddle, waddle, waddle, but ducks don't eat meat, and why the mouse?
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Haven't you heard of the mouse eating gueese. They are native animals in my imagination. And so savage. Truth is, the editor (me) didn't pick-up the meat-eating error.
Comment from Sanku
I like the starting line 'waddle ,waddle waddle, but no quack quack quack'
I can imagine a family goose trooping all over. I feel there is something more here than just goose..But I am not able to pin point it .Eating a piece of meat ...and the line that he never thought he would eat his best friend and finally the line 'I truly loved Dad's wife'...intriguing lines.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I like the starting line 'waddle ,waddle waddle, but no quack quack quack'
I can imagine a family goose trooping all over. I feel there is something more here than just goose..But I am not able to pin point it .Eating a piece of meat ...and the line that he never thought he would eat his best friend and finally the line 'I truly loved Dad's wife'...intriguing lines.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I can tell you what's wrong, there was one extra goose involved, ME. Gueese don't eat meat. I don't know what I was thinking. Sorry about that.
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Nor should they write poetry after consuming a bottle of wine.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here Bob, this is hilarious and I was thoroughly entertained. If you are talking about that picture with the geese in a line, I think it was a writing prompt not a contest so you could have still used that picture for your poem. Do these guys eat mice? I thought they ate seeds, fruit and veg? Anyway I thought this write was good fun Bob, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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You made me smile here Bob, this is hilarious and I was thoroughly entertained. If you are talking about that picture with the geese in a line, I think it was a writing prompt not a contest so you could have still used that picture for your poem. Do these guys eat mice? I thought they ate seeds, fruit and veg? Anyway I thought this write was good fun Bob, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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I know I could have used it, but I'm technologically challenged. I need my grandson's assistance for such endeavors. Once again I thank you for your generosity with the stars.
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Hi Bob,
I will send you a private message with instructions.
Love Dolly x x x
Comment from Ben Colder
I raised ducks once and saw the title of your work. I was thinking of the times when they Wable and struct around the area. Good work. I see nothing wrong. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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I raised ducks once and saw the title of your work. I was thinking of the times when they Wable and struct around the area. Good work. I see nothing wrong. Have a great day.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you BC for stopping by and reviewing. Your words are most encouraging and from BC to BC I thank you for them.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Waddle, Waddle, Waddle, which I assume was to attached to the picture of walking geese, seems to, with humor, descend from a day out with the goslings to a cannibal scene. What?
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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This poem, Waddle, Waddle, Waddle, which I assume was to attached to the picture of walking geese, seems to, with humor, descend from a day out with the goslings to a cannibal scene. What?
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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I'm not sure who was the goose, those creatures in the photo you describe, or the writer. My vote suggests the writer. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
