Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

I love how Bea is growing and learning. I am home now and so glad to be able to follow along on your adventures once more. Always a pleasure. And...a new character, "the voice", I love it.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

This is a delightful review. Thank you for your interest. Bea is honored.

reply by JT traveller on 29-Mar-2023

:-)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very interesting. I do have two suggestions/comments that I think may improve this. There is a lot of telling and narration being done. We are told what Bea thinks, how Bea feels, what Bea remembers. It may be better if those were shown. It would bring the readers and Bea closer.

I would increase the font size a bit.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you for your involved review. I will take into consideration your observations.,

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Liz, it's a wonderful chapter and I read it with great interest. Yes, the struggles you described are so real.
I don't know whether you realise I've just posted a new chapter to a new book. It on the front page and it still pay. Lol. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you for your delightful and caring review. I will check you ch 1 out. Thank you for the heads up

Comment from strandregs

Excellent

Dear old mindsets
For me there are a lot of mindsets that escape daily.
But, single mindedness is a virtue when you are dissociative and dissregulated.
Just makes the journey a long hard climbe.
I think B complex help me. Although I forget to take that as well.
I see the installing ideas idea.
I think a parent to discuss it would be valuable. :-))Z.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you for insightful review. I have ADD but am a puddle for the HD part. But my mind is plenty active.

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea was definitely a little confused as she digested all the information. She learned from the best- Willow. Willow turned her questions back to her- she addressed the 'what ifs' as she turned her questions back at her. Very creative, very inquinous. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This is a good lesson and a hard lesson for children to learn, heck even for adults. Thank you for putting it into simple language and an easy to understand language.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you for your thorough review. I'm glad you appreciated it.

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Very well written story chapter. It certainly is entertaining to children and the ones sleeping in us! I like the whole calming tone throughout and the wisdom which is embedded in the story.
Nicely written!!!
Mario

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Wow. Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you appreciated its substance.

reply by Mario PIERRE on 29-Mar-2023

NP. BTW, I posted a short story few days ago. It's title: in the name of the son.

M

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you for the heads up.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is a good lesson for all to learn. It takes faith to take little steps of a big process and going down is harder because we can't see where to place our feet/paws. I really liked "The fifty bees were replaced by sweet humming bees. " to show the change from anxiety to calm. Now I wonder what that voice is - is it her own or someone else's?

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

This was a delightful review. You tickle me with how you really get into the mystery I sneak in to several chapters. You make it rewarding. I hope you are taking little rests...lol