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Exotic Atmospheric Dance

Northern Lights as seen from our home

39 total reviews 
Comment from w.j.debi
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I have it on my bucket list to get up north and see the aurora bourealis. I've seen pictures, but I think it must be one of those things that you have to see in person to truly appreciate it.
Perfect word count. I like the personification of the northern lights as you bring her life and add to her mystery as she vanishes into the night.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023

    I thank you Debi for your
    very kind comments for my Northern Lights post. I always appreciate your thoughtfulness. Thank you again my very dear friend.
Comment from Julie Lau
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What a beautiful photo of a phenomenon that we don't see down here. I enjoyed your description of the Aurora and the pleasure you derived from her Good luck in the competition. Julie L

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    I thank you Julie, for your very kind comments for my Northern Lights post. I always appreciate your thoughtfulness. Thank you again my very dear friend.
Comment from Heather Knight
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You are really lucky to have such a wonderful view. I have only seen the aurora borealis in pictures and videos. Maybe one day.
I like your flash fiction because it reads like poetry.
Thanks for sharing. x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my Northern Lights-and also for your gift of six stars!
    You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
    It's so appreciated, my dear friend.
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reply by Heather Knight on 31-Mar-2023
    :)
Comment from Jane Jane King
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Debi, this is magnificent. A beautiful picture and equally beautiful words to enhance it. The colors do indeed create an alluring, exotic dance. Both words and image are breathtakingly lovely. Can I ask where you live?

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Jane. as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my Northern Lights-and also for your gift of six stars!
    You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
    It's so appreciated, my dear friend.
Comment from lancellot
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Congratulations. I think you have a clear winner with this one. It has that love and appeal of nature's wonder and innocence that suitable for general audiences and FanStory seniors alike. If I know my committee members, you have their votes.

Perfectly done.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
    I am very touched by your kind comments, Lance. It means a lot to me. Thank you my friend.
Comment from Mary Shifman
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This is lovely. I've only seen the Northern Lights a few times but they were spectacular. I can only imagine what the first peoples thought when they saw the glorious aurora borealis dancing across the sky. The picture your son took is amazing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my Northern Lights-and also for your gift of six stars!
    You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
    It's so appreciated, my dear friend.
reply by Mary Shifman on 31-Mar-2023
    You are welcome. I always enjoy your work.
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Debi, good descriptive writing. I could see Aurora doing her exotic dance. I could see her dancing joyfully with her sheets of green. Like a true temptress, she did leave us wanting more--ooh-la-la. And like a true mystery woman, she disappears into the night. Excellent YouTube. The photo just captures the essence of it all. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Margaret you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my Northern Lights Post. It's so appreciated, my dear friend
Comment from Spitfire
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You did a wonderful job of expressing this in prose. Good choice of verbs with dazzled, shed, and vanished. I hope it does well in the contest. I appreciated your notes.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Shari you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my Northern Lights Post. It's so appreciated, my dear friend
Comment from Ulla
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Yes, I have just read on the the news todday that the northern and southern lights have been especially spectacular.this year..and your photo just show that. Good luck with this in the contest. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Ulla you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind ' words for my Northern Lights Post. It's so appreciated, my dear friend
Comment from Regina Elliott
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Hi kind friend! We even got
them down here!!! My
daughter's friend had the
photos of them just like the
gorgeous one you posted
here. My very warmest wishes for the contest.
xxxxxoooooo

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Regina, as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my Northern Lights-and also for your gift of six stars!
    You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
    It's ~ so appreciated, my dear friend.