Exotic Atmospheric Dance
Northern Lights as seen from our home39 total reviews
Comment from 1Dreamer
Congratulations on your third place win for this beautiful piece. I saw the northern lights while living in Fairbanks, Alaska. Something I will never forget and so glad I got the experience. Magical! Your description was beautiful. All the best.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Congratulations on your third place win for this beautiful piece. I saw the northern lights while living in Fairbanks, Alaska. Something I will never forget and so glad I got the experience. Magical! Your description was beautiful. All the best.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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I thank you so very much 1Dreamer. What a lovely review and comments. I appreciate them more than you could possible know. Thanks for topping this dance off with extra stars in the background. This means so much to me!!
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well sis, you have a very inviting way of explaining the esoteric Aurora to us mere mortals. You remind those of us who may glance up and say oh, that's nice, that there's much more to the beauty that we often let escape from our site and our awareness. Another wonderful piece! Embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Well sis, you have a very inviting way of explaining the esoteric Aurora to us mere mortals. You remind those of us who may glance up and say oh, that's nice, that there's much more to the beauty that we often let escape from our site and our awareness. Another wonderful piece! Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for this dear Nad. I appreciate this lovely review and your sweet six stars so much. You are the greatest, and like I wrote in my last reply, lets get caught up in emails.
debipm@icloud.com
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You are most welcome sis.
Comment from Tpa
Enjoyed your story, writing a story with limit words. Your words painted a vivid picture. Your descriptions were outstanding and your verbs poetically danced across the page. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
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Enjoyed your story, writing a story with limit words. Your words painted a vivid picture. Your descriptions were outstanding and your verbs poetically danced across the page. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I also live in Minnesota and during this night of Northern Light display, we were in our vacation condo on Lake Superior in Lutsen. This was visible but we went to bed earlier after day of skiing. When I saw photos on Facebook from a friend who works at our resort, I was kicking myself. We go there once per month and hope they will show up again.
I saw it once more than 30 years ago in Kenora, Canada.
Well done.
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I also live in Minnesota and during this night of Northern Light display, we were in our vacation condo on Lake Superior in Lutsen. This was visible but we went to bed earlier after day of skiing. When I saw photos on Facebook from a friend who works at our resort, I was kicking myself. We go there once per month and hope they will show up again.
I saw it once more than 30 years ago in Kenora, Canada.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
Comment from Anne Johnston
Beautiful picture of the Northern Lights, Debi, and your words describe them well. It's been a long time since I have actually seen them, but they certainly are one of God's great creations
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Beautiful picture of the Northern Lights, Debi, and your words describe them well. It's been a long time since I have actually seen them, but they certainly are one of God's great creations
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We went to Norway in the hope of seeing the Northern Lights, but it was not to be. Then, last week, they could be seen in many places in the midlands and north of England. Again, we missed it, living right down south. I bet it was lovely that you got to see them so clearly. I like your dribble fiction, my friend. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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We went to Norway in the hope of seeing the Northern Lights, but it was not to be. Then, last week, they could be seen in many places in the midlands and north of England. Again, we missed it, living right down south. I bet it was lovely that you got to see them so clearly. I like your dribble fiction, my friend. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautifully written and presented entry. In your personification of your Aurora reminds me of a famous dancer Isadora Duncan who tossed aside ridgid ballet to a freedom of the natural movement of the human body with dance in a flowing Greek tunic and long flowing scarves.
Best wishes for the contest.
Mary
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A beautifully written and presented entry. In your personification of your Aurora reminds me of a famous dancer Isadora Duncan who tossed aside ridgid ballet to a freedom of the natural movement of the human body with dance in a flowing Greek tunic and long flowing scarves.
Best wishes for the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed your poem, and photo! I loved your flow of words. I appreciated your use of personification. I find that I personify any, and every thing- thtoughout my day. I haven't traveled much, in my lifetime. Your writing and visuals, took me on a trip. Thank you!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed your poem, and photo! I loved your flow of words. I appreciated your use of personification. I find that I personify any, and every thing- thtoughout my day. I haven't traveled much, in my lifetime. Your writing and visuals, took me on a trip. Thank you!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
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Alex as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review kind words for my Northern Lights-and also for your gift of six stars!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend.
Comment from Brandon Clark
Very nicely done. It is a great challenge to do a 50 word flash and you did so, quite well.
I lived in Alaska as a kid and got to see these quite a bit. They're kind of like an electric rainbow.
Well done and best of luck in the contest,
Brandon
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Very nicely done. It is a great challenge to do a 50 word flash and you did so, quite well.
I lived in Alaska as a kid and got to see these quite a bit. They're kind of like an electric rainbow.
Well done and best of luck in the contest,
Brandon
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I thank you Brandon, for your very kind comments for my Northern Lights post. I always appreciate your thoughtfulness. How cool that you kiced even closer to them once!! Thank you again my very dear friend.
Comment from Jim Wile
Beautifully written, Debi. I loved the personification of the northern lights as an exotic woman doing her encore presentation of a dance in the sky. I've never been fortunate enough to see her at work, but you've described her beautifully, and that's an impressive picture. Very well-done flash story. Jim
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Beautifully written, Debi. I loved the personification of the northern lights as an exotic woman doing her encore presentation of a dance in the sky. I've never been fortunate enough to see her at work, but you've described her beautifully, and that's an impressive picture. Very well-done flash story. Jim
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I thank you Jim, for your
very kind comments for my Northern Lights post. I always appreciate your thoughtfulness very much. Thank you again my very dear friend.
