Stag Alone
5-7-5 poem about stag17 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry was awesome, CC. The art choice
was perfect with words to match. I liked the alliteration
of b, c, and d. Your words were descriptive--even if no
picture had been included; I could picture this as I read.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Your contest entry was awesome, CC. The art choice
was perfect with words to match. I liked the alliteration
of b, c, and d. Your words were descriptive--even if no
picture had been included; I could picture this as I read.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your well chosen words are creative and descriptive, allowing the reader to easily envision the brown stag. In just a few words, you've crafted a compelling story. Your artwork pairs perfectly with your poetry. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Your well chosen words are creative and descriptive, allowing the reader to easily envision the brown stag. In just a few words, you've crafted a compelling story. Your artwork pairs perfectly with your poetry. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for a kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
Love is always in demand no matter the reason the creature or why.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Love is always in demand no matter the reason the creature or why.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thanks bunches for five stars!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice! And I adore this picture too!
It can be difficult sometimes to wrote something well and in a small space and you have done do quite well!
Your poem is not only aesthetically pleasing, it is also very well written. Good choice of subject matter and word selection.
A great job thank you so much for your submission and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Very nice! And I adore this picture too!
It can be difficult sometimes to wrote something well and in a small space and you have done do quite well!
Your poem is not only aesthetically pleasing, it is also very well written. Good choice of subject matter and word selection.
A great job thank you so much for your submission and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review.
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your ekphrastic three-line poem of the stag. He really could be giving out his best mating call. And I'm sure across the canyon it would echo particularly loud! Great use of alliteration and consonance. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Enjoyed your ekphrastic three-line poem of the stag. He really could be giving out his best mating call. And I'm sure across the canyon it would echo particularly loud! Great use of alliteration and consonance. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you much for your perceptive review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Chrystie, I really like this three line poem for the contest. The imagery is vivid in your 5-7-5 poem. I loved it. All the best of luck.in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Hi Chrystie, I really like this three line poem for the contest. The imagery is vivid in your 5-7-5 poem. I loved it. All the best of luck.in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review.
Comment from royowen
What a great entry in this three line contest, you've chosen a fine piece of art to support and embellish your completion post, good colour choice, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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What a great entry in this three line contest, you've chosen a fine piece of art to support and embellish your completion post, good colour choice, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your super review and the five stars.
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Welcome
Comment from patcelaw
It is amazing how the animals birds and look like in nature go about finding a mate. I loved what you did with this particular photograph. I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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It is amazing how the animals birds and look like in nature go about finding a mate. I loved what you did with this particular photograph. I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Very descriptive story in so few words and syllable.
Not only is it the male stag who calls for his doe, other males are sometimes drawn to the same. And many times have embarrassed ourselves.
Thank you. Perfect photo to accompany your poem.
Cheers.
John
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Very descriptive story in so few words and syllable.
Not only is it the male stag who calls for his doe, other males are sometimes drawn to the same. And many times have embarrassed ourselves.
Thank you. Perfect photo to accompany your poem.
Cheers.
John
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Stag Alone, has the proper formatting and finds the ready-to-mate stag giving a shout out for the doe-eyed Miss Right who will be more than just a 'deer' friend.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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This 5-7-5, Stag Alone, has the proper formatting and finds the ready-to-mate stag giving a shout out for the doe-eyed Miss Right who will be more than just a 'deer' friend.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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LOL. You often have such clever reviews they ought to be used as an example for other reviewers. Thanks for five stars!
