Comment from evilynne

Exceptional

What a nice tribute to your parents! It is well stated and accompanied by a nice picture. It fits the rules well. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! You have made my day! It's appreciated and an honor!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author.
I liked the image and the rhymes.
Yes, parents and children can coexist with
each keeping their own identity.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you for your kind review and for the best wishes!

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

This is a little different type of love story. But loving your parents is still cool. Transparent is a fun way to end the poem. I must confess, I am not sure what what the next to last word is...it reads like it should be 'still' but it looks like stull...not sure how that works. Terry.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thanks!

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

I changed the words you suggested. It's much better. Thanks for your help!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This love poem, I Love My Parents, uses ten words and describes a couple who have managed to raise a child without bordering off their personal lives from their kids understanding of family. Nice.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thanks!