Chocolate Surprise
My one desire7 total reviews
Comment from Kayliegh
Yep, lol! Every girl on her time or just regular can understand this! I also love the wording and the way you describe it, it makes me want to grab a chocolate bar...� Mmmmm, great job! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Yep, lol! Every girl on her time or just regular can understand this! I also love the wording and the way you describe it, it makes me want to grab a chocolate bar...� Mmmmm, great job! Also quick but important thing, your soul. Have you ever looked at a beautiful painting and thought that the painting painted itself? No, of course not, the painting means there must be a painter. Now imagine every sunrise, sunset, mountain, atom in your body, all your family and friends. Can you imagine that making itself? No of course not there had to have been a someone, a God, to create that. And no matter how good of a person you think you are, you have sinned against that God. But there is still hope for you, that's why Jesus died on the cross for you, yes you. Repent of your sins and trust in Jesus and he will replace your heart of stone for a heart of flesh. I'm not exactly the height of knowledge on the topic, so I would highly recommend that for more information you go to Living Waters on YouTube, please just watch one video and you won't regret it. Alright have a nice day, God bless!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I love chocolate, too. One year while I was teaching, one of my team made little Chocolate Lava Cakes for my birthday--one for each of us! It was the first time I'd ever heard of it, and it was scrumptious! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I love chocolate, too. One year while I was teaching, one of my team made little Chocolate Lava Cakes for my birthday--one for each of us! It was the first time I'd ever heard of it, and it was scrumptious! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well of course, Jan, isn't chocolate one of the
food groups with specified servings per day?
You did a great job with your contest entry. Your
descriptive words made chocolate sound even better
if that's possible.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Well of course, Jan, isn't chocolate one of the
food groups with specified servings per day?
You did a great job with your contest entry. Your
descriptive words made chocolate sound even better
if that's possible.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you
Comment from lancellot
This is very nice. You really worked the thesaurus in this lovely tribute to Sugary goodness.
I think this will be very relatable and appealing to many people. This is almost a universal guilty pleasure that often beats us... at least twice a week.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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This is very nice. You really worked the thesaurus in this lovely tribute to Sugary goodness.
I think this will be very relatable and appealing to many people. This is almost a universal guilty pleasure that often beats us... at least twice a week.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Terry Broxson
Oh my, this a terrific post on the guilty pleasure of chocolate! As I read the story so full of rich imagery, I thought I was reading some forbidden erotic tale...and I am pretty sure I was, except for the forbidden part...LOL. Outstanding writing. Thank you for entering the contest. Terry.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Oh my, this a terrific post on the guilty pleasure of chocolate! As I read the story so full of rich imagery, I thought I was reading some forbidden erotic tale...and I am pretty sure I was, except for the forbidden part...LOL. Outstanding writing. Thank you for entering the contest. Terry.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Oh thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments.
Comment from patcelaw
Anything chocolate to me is a guilty pleasure. I do not often says come to that pleasure, though, as it causes me a real problem with my weight. I wish you the best of luck in the guilty pleasure contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Anything chocolate to me is a guilty pleasure. I do not often says come to that pleasure, though, as it causes me a real problem with my weight. I wish you the best of luck in the guilty pleasure contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Ok, thanks Pat
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness Jan, you made my mouth water here and I wanted to rush to my fridge and melt some chocolate over my strawberries! He he he, a delicious write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Oh my goodness Jan, you made my mouth water here and I wanted to rush to my fridge and melt some chocolate over my strawberries! He he he, a delicious write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Dolly
