March Twenty-Eight
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Comment from Brittany H.
I really liked that you used an actual event, rhymed, and kept it within twenty syllables. I looked it up and indeed 5 planets will align today so thanks for the information and the talented poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I really liked that you used an actual event, rhymed, and kept it within twenty syllables. I looked it up and indeed 5 planets will align today so thanks for the information and the talented poem. Great job!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much for the sixth star and for your kind words. I hope you can see it from wherever you are.
Comment from Tila Tenney
I like the imagery of the planets aligning and with the title it brings the specificity of the date of this occurring. But then the second line draws in a new perspective of the meaning of aligning and the expression of hope for our own planet to be set right. Very fitting for these times
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I like the imagery of the planets aligning and with the title it brings the specificity of the date of this occurring. But then the second line draws in a new perspective of the meaning of aligning and the expression of hope for our own planet to be set right. Very fitting for these times
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thanks for the review
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Love it! A snappy and fun two liner that delivers a bit of a message. One can't ask for much more than that out of a two line poem. Well done. I will be outside hoping to observe this phenomenon.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Love it! A snappy and fun two liner that delivers a bit of a message. One can't ask for much more than that out of a two line poem. Well done. I will be outside hoping to observe this phenomenon.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you for reviewing. I wish you clear skies tonight.
