The Ways of the Wild
2-line poem: Finding harmony with nature5 total reviews
Comment from Gina Schneller
This poem is awesome! First of all, I love the picture you chose. Its beautiful and fits the words perfectly. Your words and thought flow nicely and I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing with us all.
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This poem is awesome! First of all, I love the picture you chose. Its beautiful and fits the words perfectly. Your words and thought flow nicely and I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing with us all.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the Two-lined Poetry contest. The text is a great size. I like it centered on the visual. Your message is stated with clarity and is easily understood. Nature can be healing. Your rhyme scheme is on point.
The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a good entry into the Two-lined Poetry contest. The text is a great size. I like it centered on the visual. Your message is stated with clarity and is easily understood. Nature can be healing. Your rhyme scheme is on point.
The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
Comment from w.j.debi
This post has such a peaceful feeling to it. I enjoyed the alliteration in 'muddles' and 'mind'. I also enjoyed the assonance of the 'i' in 'mind', 'unkind', 'unwind' and 'find'.
The presentation is beautiful.
Good luck in the contest.
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This post has such a peaceful feeling to it. I enjoyed the alliteration in 'muddles' and 'mind'. I also enjoyed the assonance of the 'i' in 'mind', 'unkind', 'unwind' and 'find'.
The presentation is beautiful.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Both nice rhyming and alliteration. The poem also has a message and bit of a story. That's a whole lot to accomplish in two lines. Well done and good luck.
-Chuck
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Both nice rhyming and alliteration. The poem also has a message and bit of a story. That's a whole lot to accomplish in two lines. Well done and good luck.
-Chuck
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
Comment from Julie Lau
I am sure that these words will be true for many. Congratulations on being able to express yourself so succinctly and well. All the best for the contest. I am sure you will do well. Julie Lau
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I am sure that these words will be true for many. Congratulations on being able to express yourself so succinctly and well. All the best for the contest. I am sure you will do well. Julie Lau
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
