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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, a poem of truth. Good imagery. I love the red poppies.
Of special note: where soldiers spilled their blood--indeed, they did.
When it comes to war, there are no winners. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Hi Gypsy, a poem of truth. Good imagery. I love the red poppies.
Of special note: where soldiers spilled their blood--indeed, they did.
When it comes to war, there are no winners. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
The war took place long ago, but we wonder if the spirits of the dead haunt us still. How would the world have turned out if the wear had not taken place, and people had prospered?
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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The war took place long ago, but we wonder if the spirits of the dead haunt us still. How would the world have turned out if the wear had not taken place, and people had prospered?
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. The dual picture was great, the field of poppies were very special to me. They spoke of the soldiers who did die there. What a great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. The dual picture was great, the field of poppies were very special to me. They spoke of the soldiers who did die there. What a great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thanky, Aryr, I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I remember living in Germany and seeing the poppy fields. They were beautiful. A few weeks back I saw a poppy field in the US. You don't see them as often as you do in Europe. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I remember living in Germany and seeing the poppy fields. They were beautiful. A few weeks back I saw a poppy field in the US. You don't see them as often as you do in Europe. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Spain has a lot of red poppy fields. In California they are orange.
Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem- excellent picture presentation lol- good notes explaining the setting- interesting story- flows well- last stanza- get stuck on 'won't' -( and my light grows dim tonight)--.good job AP
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I like your tanka poem- excellent picture presentation lol- good notes explaining the setting- interesting story- flows well- last stanza- get stuck on 'won't' -( and my light grows dim tonight)--.good job AP
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you, ap. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I haven't seen that movie so I'm losing the meaning about the old man's wine but I liked the idea of a Firefly in love with the evening star, or the planet Venus. Fireflies communicate with their lights I think.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I haven't seen that movie so I'm losing the meaning about the old man's wine but I liked the idea of a Firefly in love with the evening star, or the planet Venus. Fireflies communicate with their lights I think.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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I started from scratch, it was a bad poem. Thank you very much for your time and helpfull feedback.
Love,
Marival ❤️