Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Melissa,
This matches the prompt well and imbues the fact the nature is beautiful.
It is also delicate and we need to do things to keep it healthy.
I like the ending alliteration,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2023

Thanks so much Joan! I love flowers!

Melissa

reply by dragonpoet on 02-Apr-2023

You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet!

You now have 4 votes.

I love to watch la flora burst into blossom ( not so keen on the sweet scent though , it gives me a headache )

One of my favourites is cherry blossom, famous in Japan.

Those vivid pinks and violets enthral me... feel like eating the petals.

My Lolita loved Spring and she ate her fill of blossom and the pollen . She looked so cute with a yellow powdered face.

PS: please forgive me but I thought you could have show cased your words even better with a pic of cherry blossom on a black background ( biggrin)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Franca. I'm delighted you liked it!

Melissa

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello,

Good entry for the 1-1-2-12 writing prompt contest.

well done! I love the words imagery and nice presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you for sharing, good luck..

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thanks so much, Gypsy!

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

What a wonderful, gorgeous image you have posted. Flowers do make a person's mind crave for nature's beauty. Some of them can be very delicate, fragile.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thanks so much.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Well, I just love the picture attached to this short piece. Just heaven sent. The simplicity of the poem allows the reader to focus on the subject further and the alliteration makes it sing. Well done on this great read.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thanks so much DD :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good descriptive words to begin,
followed by effective imagery and alliteration
that describe the blossoms.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thanks so much.

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These spring flowers have inspired your fine words here and I wish you luck with the contest as we all love to see these vibrant flowers making an appearance in sprint, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thank you.

Comment from Lady MJ

Good

Springtime is a time of new beginnings. We all smile, like nature does, when the air starts filling with the smell of flowers and birds fly about as bees are busily buzzing around. Pansies are beautiful and a this was a good picture choice. Words used in poem are well chosen.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thank you.

Comment from Julie Lau

Excellent

A sweet little poem, keeping well to the specified format, and I love the photo of the pansies. Best of luck in the contest. I may join in if I can raise the entry fee by reviewing. Yours, Julie Lau

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thanks so much

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

This is a very nice use of limited syllables. The flow is good. The images are clear. The presentation fits well with the poem.

Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!

reply by dellsworthpoet on 27-Mar-2023

You are welcome.