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A Poetic Mystery

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Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Lea, does this mean that your imaginary friend the sorceress is trying to take control of you?
If so you will need all your wits to keep her under control
Colourful image also
Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much Christine you gave me a chuckle...never took over my mind. This is what could happen if she did maybe... It's called a tulpa because thoughts are things and our minds are more powerful than. We know it's Tulpa is something that's given substance for life if you will because so many people believe in it. Or the power one strong mind believes in it so much that it does become real intangible but it's in fact a Tulpa examples would be bigfoot, the loch ness monster very real entities indeed are created by belief and not by birth. Hope that makes some sense thank you by the way for your rock in review. I really appreciate your time and your effort and I hope you have a great evening!
reply by Chrissy710 on 06-Apr-2023
    Hi Lea,
    You mean the Lochness monster is not real lol. I have been to Scotland in 1977and we hoped to see it but alas it must have been sleeping that day.
    Yes Lea i will but it is 12.15 pm here in Australia cold and wet today so i will just spend time writing
    Have to think of poems for the rest of April (like you) I shall also catch up on your other posts for these books

    Cheers Chris
Comment from Ben Colder
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Your Tulpa reminds me of a Bible story where Salomi danced for John the Baptist's head. Weird, but true. John preached about the king marrying his brother's wife.
I see no mistakes. Best to you.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you appreciate it and glad that you were able to get something from. For your time and for your comments I am also grateful and wish you the best of days!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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The illustration is brilliant and eye catching, suggesting female power and energy! Ideas which are felt strongly enough will change the world eventually.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Thank you sarah that's really good inside on your part and I appreciate your time as always and for your kind words much appreciative. I hope you haven't awesome a great day!
reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 01-Apr-2023
    All good luck with your book!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
    Ty!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I'm looking forward to your new mystery. I love the title "Poetic Mystery" that sounds very intriguing. The cover art is very colorful and larger than life, too.

I can't wait to read more.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you the whole thing comes out at the end of April. That's right. I hope you have a great day. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it! Always required different comments in different ideas for sure
Comment from Brandon Clark
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Thoughts can certainly be persistent enough to manifest actual events. I doubt I coined this, but the way I sum up this notion is by realizing that "impossible is not a conclusion that people who deem their work as possible - whether in their lifetime or not - will simply reach for the goal no matter how many times they come up short, adding a piece to the puzzle if nothing else."

Probably the best example of this is Fermat's Last Theorem - a mathematical mystery that went unsolved for three centuries despite so many dedicating their lives to solve it...and all because Fermat wrote in a margin that he had a proof to and equation but couldn't fit it in the margin...then died shortly after. Wikipedia link if you want to read more about it is:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fermat%27s_Last_Theorem#:~:text=In%20number%20theory%2C%20Fermat's%20Last,of%20n%20greater%20than%202.

Excellent job with such few words and awesome image choice as well! Nicely done!

Brandon

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you Brandon a very thorough review I thank you so much for that! I thank u too for your time and your great review!😉🙃🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Is this women fighting back here Lea, becoming strong and steadfast, the mind and heart control our emotions and this is where we need the inner strength, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you dolly appreciate you! As always I thank you for looking at my work and offering your comments!
Comment from JT traveller
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A blind leap of faith or a strong independent character? Mystical, magical. What a great childhood friend. Love, love the illustration to accompany your bold words. J

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it. I hope you're enjoying your time in the sun.
    I appreciate you taking the time to do this especially when you're in such a gorgeous place. I hope you have a wonderful day!
reply by JT traveller on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you. It rained this afternoon so I have been very productive. Writing poetry. I had a new idea for a potential novel so started a draft and some research, talked to my Iranian Australian friends about food and frequencies. I always have time. Your words inspire me. Have a great day 😊
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you I really enjoy your work hope you're having a good time!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Oh yeah I made that picture i'm glad you like it
reply by JT traveller on 26-Mar-2023
    Via a graphics program or AI? It is truly stunning.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    I run it through several filters a. I just want a Benny. I use all the graphic tools I can find also have my own paintings I use as well I paint with it crilics wildlife pictures most Especially like the jungle animals.
reply by JT traveller on 26-Mar-2023
    Wow. You are a talent! I am impressed. Would love to see some of your paintings sometime.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    I run it through several filters a. I just want a Benny. I use all the graphic tools I can find also have my own paintings I use as well I paint with it crilics wildlife pictures most Especially like the jungle animals. I will send you a couple pictures of my paintings through email and these are actual paint by hand paintings l o l