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Comment from Sally Law
You know I have you back; and I know you have mine. Thank you for that, Debi Pick Marquette! You're a wonderful friend and godly presence in my life. I am blessed beyond measure.
To call you friend is a privilege. Thank you for sharing this in the midst of a difficult week. A shining testament to your character. This freshly brewed lemonade is the best yet! I think I'll have another glass or two.
Love and blessings always.
BBB XOs!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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You know I have you back; and I know you have mine. Thank you for that, Debi Pick Marquette! You're a wonderful friend and godly presence in my life. I am blessed beyond measure.
To call you friend is a privilege. Thank you for sharing this in the midst of a difficult week. A shining testament to your character. This freshly brewed lemonade is the best yet! I think I'll have another glass or two.
Love and blessings always.
BBB XOs!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Hey there Sally, I thank you so much for such kind words for this poem. And also for honoring me with your six stars.
I hope this poem shows you how very much you mean to me. Thanks again, my dear friend!
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My pleasure to read and review this, dear one. The six is well deserved. I am blessed again, reading it the second time. I love the song, too, by the way. I remember dancing around my best friend?s house and singing this song. Pretend I am there with you today:
You just call on me sister
When you need a hand
We all need
Somebody
to lean on!
Ain?t it the truth?!
BBB XOs
Comment from Faith Williams
I like your line about 'this great writing buffet.' Take what you want and leave the rest behind. Or if you don't like something, there's no need to pick it up. Leave it for someone else who does like it. Such a great metaphor, Debi! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I like your line about 'this great writing buffet.' Take what you want and leave the rest behind. Or if you don't like something, there's no need to pick it up. Leave it for someone else who does like it. Such a great metaphor, Debi! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I thank you so much for such kind words for this poem.
I hope this poem shows you how very much you mean to me.
Thanks again, my dear friend!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I have been on fanstory intermittently since 2013. This is the first time I have trusted myself enough to share my personal story. This group for the most part does have your back. I like that I feel personal growth on here. Showing your true you, warts and all, takes tremendous courage. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
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I have been on fanstory intermittently since 2013. This is the first time I have trusted myself enough to share my personal story. This group for the most part does have your back. I like that I feel personal growth on here. Showing your true you, warts and all, takes tremendous courage. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments here and family always seem to support us even when we default. You made me smile when you said you don't owe Jesus anything, he he he, a brave remark.
The first two stanzas have perfect metre and rhymes Debbie. You started to lose it on the third stanza and it is a pity that the attention to detail is missing in this regard, because you prove you can do it. Perhaps shortening your lines might help you keep the metre in order?
All in all I thought your post was positive and uplifting.
Love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed the sentiments here and family always seem to support us even when we default. You made me smile when you said you don't owe Jesus anything, he he he, a brave remark.
The first two stanzas have perfect metre and rhymes Debbie. You started to lose it on the third stanza and it is a pity that the attention to detail is missing in this regard, because you prove you can do it. Perhaps shortening your lines might help you keep the metre in order?
All in all I thought your post was positive and uplifting.
Love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much Dolly. I have been so careful with that meter, but lol, I needed to let go on parts to better say what I so needed to say. You are special my friend and you have no idea how much I appreciate your review and kind comments.
